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Author:  pip&leggyluvr [ February 5th, 2007, 12:01 pm ]
Post subject:  Hold Me Close (G)
idk where this came from...i wrote it randomly the other day in english class, so, yea....just let me know wut u think....

Hold me close,
Tell me it's all okay.
Tell me you love me,
And you'll never go away.

Lie to me if you must,
Just make me believe
That with you, I am safe;
For once, I need not grieve.

For my heart has been so broken;
So hurt and so abused.
I feel so empty and so alone;
So hurt and so confused.

So hold me close, my darling;
Tell me you love me.
Give my broken heart some hope;
Hear my pathetic plea.
Author:  Jax Nova [ February 5th, 2007, 2:35 pm ]
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Nice job. :) Ryms well and flows. :) ..
Author:  pip&leggyluvr [ February 5th, 2007, 5:29 pm ]
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thanks, Jax :-D
Author:  Lady Elenriel [ February 5th, 2007, 11:07 pm ]
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Great work pip! I love the rhythm to the piece. It is also very eloquently expressed. Great job and keep it up!:)
Author:  pip&leggyluvr [ February 6th, 2007, 2:02 pm ]
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thanks, Elenriel. i appreciate it :)
Author:  Jax Nova [ February 6th, 2007, 2:40 pm ]
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True, very well expressed and has good emotion. :)
Author:  pip&leggyluvr [ February 6th, 2007, 5:05 pm ]
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well, there's def. a lot of emotion behind it....as usual. lol so thanks. :)
Author:  Jax Nova [ February 7th, 2007, 3:53 pm ]
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lol yeah. But it comes out well in the poem I think. :)
Author:  pip&leggyluvr [ February 9th, 2007, 9:47 pm ]
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thanks, Jax. that means a lot. it really does. :)
Author:  Jax Nova [ February 10th, 2007, 11:26 am ]
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:)

Only speaking honestly.
Author:  pip&leggyluvr [ February 14th, 2007, 2:45 pm ]
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aw, thanks :) :hug:
Author:  Jax Nova [ February 15th, 2007, 12:39 pm ]
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:) :hug:
Author:  Mrs. Malfoy [ February 16th, 2007, 12:11 pm ]
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Very well done....Kinda reminds me of how I have been feeling lately....very nicely presented and expressed
Author:  pip&leggyluvr [ February 17th, 2007, 4:39 pm ]
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thanks. :) i'm sry u can relate though....it's not the best feeling in the world. :hug:
Author:  Mavyan Harfoot Baggins [ February 19th, 2007, 11:38 am ]
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WOW!!! I love this poem....it's very expressive, I think deserves publishing!
Author:  Mrs. Malfoy [ February 19th, 2007, 5:49 pm ]
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Eruwaedheil wrote:
Very well done....Kinda reminds me of how I have been feeling lately....very nicely presented and expressed

Yea it does but it's a little easier knowing you're not the only one whos having a rough time.....Not that it's good for anyone to be having a rough time or anythiing
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