hey, never watched the show and not much for love poetry honestly but I think you did a nice job one these.
Good form and a nice flow.
| Arwen-Undomiel.com https://arwen-undomiel.com/forum/ |
|
| I'll Know and Near You rated G https://arwen-undomiel.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=48&t=14491 |
Page 1 of 1 |
| Author: | Drew's Destiny [ March 17th, 2007, 11:54 am ] |
| Post subject: | I'll Know and Near You rated G |
Okay these are two little poems that were inspired by Skate (Lost's Sawyer and Kate) and D/Hr (Draco and Hermione). Of course I don't own anything I am just having a little fun. They are really fluffy so to speak but other than that nothing. So I gave it a G rating. Please read and let me know what you think. (I'll know) You have a wall surrounding you You add your hateful remark right on cue You want to be hated Your actions and words are related You just have to make the connection It's easy to give them justification You've been hurt yourself So in turn you hurt every one else You want them to hate you for the pain you inflict You can't stand not to cause a conflict I can see right through that bad boy act And yet my heart is still in tact You can say and do what you will But I can tell what part of you is real When you are ready to let me in, let me know We'll take it slow I'll show you the meaning of love You will be put above When you're ready to be called mine When you're ready to try to walk the line You don't really have to tell me I'll be able to see I'll allready know Beause your actions will show A bad boy's actions always say the oppisite of what they mean It's easily seen (Near You) When I look up and you're not there It's more than I can bare I want you to be near You're breath is what I want to hear Right or wrong I'll keep on singing our song I can lose my way But you're the reason for my day I have a good heart But being bad is my part If I was you I would probabley run As far away as the sun That's what we're known to do But I don't 'cause I want to be near you So here I'll stay If there is any doubt look in my eyes and it will go away |
|
| Author: | Jax Nova [ March 20th, 2007, 10:33 am ] |
| Post subject: | |
hey, never watched the show and not much for love poetry honestly but I think you did a nice job one these. Good form and a nice flow.
|
|
| Author: | Drew's Destiny [ March 20th, 2007, 10:48 am ] |
| Post subject: | |
Oh, thank you for your extremly kinds words and for taking the time to respond. I'm glad that you liked it. |
|
| Page 1 of 1 | All times are UTC - 5 hours [ DST ] |
| Powered by phpBB © 2000, 2002, 2005, 2007 phpBB Group http://www.phpbb.com/ |
|