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Author:  pip&leggyluvr [ April 2nd, 2007, 2:01 pm ]
Post subject:  Goodbye (rated G)

so, for those of u who dont know, i've finally moved on w/ my life & gotten over this guy whom i've been obsessed w/ for about 2 years now......lol so anyways, i wrote a poem about it, & here it is. let me know wut u think! :-D

It's time to move,
Start fresh; a clean slate.
Thought I was meant for you,
But I guess that's not my fate.

There was a time when I loved you,
But that time has passed.
Me heart has finally healed;
I can move on, at last.

I have to admit, the night you said goodbye,
It killed me inside.
My heart was completely shattered;
I cried and I cried.

There are some things that only time can mend.
A broken heart is one of these things.
And though the time has passed slowly,
It's finally mended mine, it seems.

No one can ever take away those memories;
All those times we laughed and cried.
But as for now, it's finally time to say
Goodbye.

Author:  Jax Nova [ April 2nd, 2007, 4:23 pm ]
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Very nice, a bit sad but well writen. :) Great job pip! :)

Author:  Slickman_G [ April 3rd, 2007, 6:35 am ]
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I love it, its so heartfelt and personal, which gives it an edge over other poems, It is sad, but thats the way life is, you just got to take the rough with the smooth. :)

Author:  pip&leggyluvr [ April 3rd, 2007, 8:44 pm ]
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thanks guys....& yes, it seems sad, but rlly, it's not.....i've been trying 2 get over this guys for like 2 years! lol

thanks again 4 the comments, though....it means a lot. it rlly does! :)

Author:  Jax Nova [ April 4th, 2007, 11:43 am ]
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:) Glad things are finally starting to pan out for ya. :)

Author:  pip&leggyluvr [ April 4th, 2007, 8:19 pm ]
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thank yha, Jax! :]

Author:  Risestel [ April 5th, 2007, 11:43 pm ]
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Wow, thats awesome. Nice poetry!

Author:  pip&leggyluvr [ April 7th, 2007, 6:46 pm ]
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thanks! :-D

Author:  ~*ArwenEvenstar*~ [ April 24th, 2007, 6:24 pm ]
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Very good. :) I'm glad that things are looking up. :)

Author:  pip&leggyluvr [ April 25th, 2007, 4:32 pm ]
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thanks, Arwen! :]

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