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Author:  Lady Dovasary [ April 8th, 2007, 7:36 pm ]
Post subject:  My Poem-Please comment!!!

Here it is:

Friends

Dedicated to my best friend in the world, Zoƫ Bear Russell.

Friends are the ones who keep you on your feet
They keep you going and don't let you fall
A friend is always there
Just like you are for me
I know that you believe in me
That thought sets me free
It lets me fly
Opening my wings
To soar through the sky
A friend is there when you fall
They help you back to you feet
Because they care
In return you do the same
And show them that they are special to you
Never let a good friend go
'Cause they're pretty hard to find these days
Keep me in your heart
And I'll keep you in mine
Because no matter what
We are friends, siblings of the heart

-MysticsAngel

Please comment!!!!

Author:  JC802 [ April 8th, 2007, 7:39 pm ]
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OMG I adore the poem you are a VERY good writer!!!

Author:  Lady Dovasary [ April 8th, 2007, 10:18 pm ]
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Thanks!!!

Author:  Risestel [ April 14th, 2007, 4:57 pm ]
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I love it. Nice job.

Author:  Lady Dovasary [ April 15th, 2007, 1:27 pm ]
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Thanks, Risestel...

Author:  Risestel [ April 15th, 2007, 6:10 pm ]
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You're welcome.

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