I love it! Fresh from watching 300 aswell, Very fitting! Quite long aswell for the middle of the night
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| Author: | mephiston, lord of death [ April 14th, 2007, 9:46 pm ] |
| Post subject: | A poem I wrote at 2 in the morning..... Serious PG/PG 13 |
This is a poem I decided to write at a time when Im usually asleep. Tell me what you think of it please. Thank You. In days of old There lived the bold Sons of Lion, Forged in the mould Of great Heracles himself, Their nations strength was not in wealth, Nor scholars wise across the board But in their warriors skill with sword Their Nation stood for a thousand years And in mens hearts for many thousands more Their peoples hearts were immune to fears Their troops, were hardened from the core For taught from youth, these noble men Would o’er time fight o’er hill or fen Many years have passed since then, Since in that Pass they stood undaunted There stood three hundred red cloaked Men They were the Spartans, Highly Vaunted For bravery, for strength, for might They went not there for the sights They saw before them, Like a encroaching shadow Xerxes massive army of Men They came to deal the Greeks a blow But despite the odds, Yet many there held The Spartans at the fore, Their minds now fell There many days, and many nights, The Spartans and their allies resisted. Their Iron blades, no longer bright With foemans blood they now were misted Their actions, they spoke louder than words They carved their fame out using their swords Yet seldom do the small defeat the large The battle became a desperate last stand The Persians, tired of charge after charge They found a way to defeat the small band This traitors name is spoken on the breeze His name................Ephialtes The end of this tale, is tragic perhaps But still, It suited their warriors creed, Yet there is but one thing of you I ask, For which I would desire and plead That though the worlds heart doth grow cold, Remember these 300, men of honour, That fought and died in days of old |
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| Author: | Slickman_G [ April 15th, 2007, 6:00 am ] |
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I love it! Fresh from watching 300 aswell, Very fitting! Quite long aswell for the middle of the night
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| Author: | mephiston, lord of death [ April 15th, 2007, 4:16 pm ] |
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I did write that at about 2. Im really serious. Thanx Slickers. |
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| Author: | mephiston, lord of death [ April 21st, 2007, 11:05 pm ] |
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is anyone else gonna comment or what? |
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| Author: | Slickman_G [ April 22nd, 2007, 7:48 am ] |
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I will again.....erm....Write some more!
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| Author: | Dark, Queen of Angmar [ April 29th, 2007, 1:04 pm ] |
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that was amazing...  you definately need to write more!
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| Author: | Snowbird [ April 29th, 2007, 1:12 pm ] |
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WOW!!!!!! That was really good!!! Definately 300 material... but it was really unique too. I loved some of the rhymings you did. Very nice! |
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| Author: | The Nightingale [ April 30th, 2007, 12:10 pm ] |
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Well, I hae'n't seen 300, don't want to, but very good poem! |
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| Author: | mephiston, lord of death [ June 1st, 2007, 10:09 pm ] |
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Thanks all I did a new poem as a tribute to the soldiers of the world wars.Have a look at it, and if you want to, comment me plaese Thanks mephiston |
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