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PostPosted: June 12th, 2006, 9:28 pm 
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Excellent start Ellie! I liked the descriptions, ie. "a wrinkle of grief was growing on her forehead". Very good! I would love to hear more!

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Wow Elegost, I love what I read so far. I especially love your imagery. Great job and I look forward to reading more. :-D

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Wow I really loved what you posted.. it sounds great :)

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*waves frantically* I'm still here! You have a hidden talent, I didn't really know how well you could write, Ellie dear. Very good all around. Hmm, "an elegant hand"? Now I am intrigued! :D

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Okies. *sits and waits patiently*

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Wow very good as well (I mean the next part ya posted..) :)

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Hmm, what is the time setting? My guess would be someone like Arwen, after the crowning of Elessar. Other than that, no clue.

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Very well :D

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I must say, I love your writing style. You are making me more curious! Lol!

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The word has been spread!

Lovely story Ellie, I really like it! Plenty of detail, but not too much to bore me to death, and a really good lead. That lead just really hooked me into the story. I'm really excited to see what you've got next.


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Wonderful as usual, Ellie! What are you going to do with this when its done?

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Yes, it does. Just email Arwen with it. That is where I put my very first one.

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shoot Ellie ... your a horribly good writer! :blink:

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Whoa, it's amazing, you'll for sure be a famous writer in future!

Danny, DaeTirion, Berethor... I've seen those names somewhere else :P

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Haha! Well I look forward to it :P

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Sort of a new reader here (I was reading this before I signed up). Awesome story, I love Elegost! I cannot wait until he travles to the north to train with the Dunadan...what time period is this? Frodo's time? Before Frodo's time? Certianly not after Frodo's time I know that.


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