Arwen-Undomiel.com
https://arwen-undomiel.com/forum/

A prayer answered PG
https://arwen-undomiel.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=48&t=16167		 Page 1 of 1
Author:  mephiston, lord of death [ August 4th, 2007, 6:57 pm ]
Post subject:  A prayer answered PG
Heya all! Ive taken a bit of a holiday from writing (nah the muse left me really) and now IM back. I have written a poem here,a bit more religious than usual, but I wrote it at church anyways. so here it is,. Hope you enjoy it.

I fell to the floor, I fell to my knees,
That hour on my bedroom floor,
And from my thoughts my homework flees,
And I locked the latch on the door.

All my toils and all my cares,
I poured out unto my Lord,
And for love and succour in prayer,
And for blessings and strength that is stored.

I wept with the memory of what the week,
Had brought to my heart and mind,
I remembered a book said "blessed are the meek"
And some other strength for my soul did I find.

I heard a voice whisper in my ear,
"My child, I will ever be thy friend,
I am with thee allways, have no fear,
I will stand by thee till the end."

"I bore the weight of the world, unbowed,
As friends left me alone,
And I ask you,of my name be proud,
take it on you, And I will bear your griefs stone."

As I finished my plea, My heart grew great,
As I thought of my Saviour and what he had done for me,
That he will be waiting, there at the last gate,
That I alone neednt pay all of lifes fee.

I stood up from my messy floor
And saw outside a day cold and grey,
I lifted the catch on the sundering door,
With my brothers assurance, I went out to face the day.
Author:  Miriel [ September 6th, 2007, 7:53 pm ]
Post subject: 
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I LOOOOOOOOOVE it :bye:
Author:  Jax Nova [ September 10th, 2007, 12:07 pm ]
Post subject: 
Loved it as well. Very nice way to show life and how God can give us the strength we need.


Although I do have a question that I like to ask people when they mention "God's Name" Do you know what it really is? just wondering.
Author:  mephiston, lord of death [ September 11th, 2007, 2:57 pm ]
Post subject: 
Jax Nova wrote:
Loved it as well. Very nice way to show life and how God can give us the strength we need.


Although I do have a question that I like to ask people when they mention "God's Name" Do you know what it really is? just wondering.

Heres a question I will ask in response:
What, may I ask you, are you asking of me?
because frankly IM not sure what you mean, and the question is about as clear as mud to me.
Author:  Larael [ September 17th, 2007, 11:19 pm ]
Post subject: 
What an amazing poem Lamenter, it really spoke to me. Sometimes I find myself in the exact same spiritual situation, not quite knowing where to turn. It's a wonderful feeling to know that the Lord is always right there for me when I need Him. Brilliantly done. :)
Author:  mephiston, lord of death [ September 24th, 2007, 4:10 am ]
Post subject: 
Thanks for the Constructive criticism Lar, I really appreciate it when the writing itself is evaluated rather than the subject taking precedence. :yes:
Author:  Miriel [ September 26th, 2007, 7:48 pm ]
Post subject: 
Are you insinuating something? :blush:
Author:  Larael [ September 29th, 2007, 5:50 pm ]
Post subject: 
^No, I don't think he is at all! It's great to get reviews [as a writer myself I can attest to this], but every once in a while constructive criticism is even better to receive. He is in no way undermining the review you have written. :)
Page 1 of 1 All times are UTC - 5 hours [ DST ]
Powered by phpBB © 2000, 2002, 2005, 2007 phpBB Group
http://www.phpbb.com/