no, the flow wasnt, i agree....but then, it wasnt supossed to be....
it was supossed to be more of my thoughts, in a poetic way.....
thank you. i'm glad i got you thinking.
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| Author: | pip&leggyluvr [ July 4th, 2008, 11:15 pm ] |
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commentos, por favor. Fear is but trickery; false exaggerations of truth. Black paint representing a figmentation of the mind loosely grips the solitary paper, eager for purpose. Will it be of justice? Passion is desire, so great and fiery with life. Masked faces strain to capture such zeal, fighting to represent and explain its consumption. Will the attempt prevail? Rage is simply cover for whatever hurts most. Hot searching bodies release this desperation through sexy steps and motion, a movement in unison. Will it matter in the end? Calm is our craving; in truth, what we all seek. Liberating notes cry out the words we had lost, leaving peace and tranquility in its echo. Will no one listen? |
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ July 8th, 2008, 11:49 am ] |
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Hm........ That's what this one has me thinking lol (in a good way) It leaves me in silent contemplation. In all honesty the poetry flow wasn't your best... but the words... wonderfull message! |
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| Author: | pip&leggyluvr [ July 8th, 2008, 4:25 pm ] |
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no, the flow wasnt, i agree....but then, it wasnt supossed to be.... it was supossed to be more of my thoughts, in a poetic way..... thank you. i'm glad i got you thinking.
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ July 9th, 2008, 2:09 pm ] |
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Makes perfect sense.  i've done that quite often actually.
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| Author: | pip&leggyluvr [ July 9th, 2008, 3:53 pm ] |
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it's a good way to get it out, i think, to not have to worry about the rhythm....*shrugs* when i have good rhythm, it's not because i tried, it's because the words worked out in my head that way. lol |
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| Author: | pip&leggyluvr [ July 29th, 2008, 8:27 am ] |
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thanks love |
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