Joined: 08 January 2006 Posts: 3132 Location: The Shire
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commentos, por favor.
Fear is but trickery; false exaggerations of truth.
Black paint representing a figmentation of the mind
loosely grips the solitary paper, eager for purpose.
Will it be of justice?
Passion is desire, so great and fiery with life.
Masked faces strain to capture such zeal,
fighting to represent and explain its consumption.
Will the attempt prevail?
Rage is simply cover for whatever hurts most.
Hot searching bodies release this desperation
through sexy steps and motion, a movement in unison.
Will it matter in the end?
Calm is our craving; in truth, what we all seek.
Liberating notes cry out the words we had lost,
leaving peace and tranquility in its echo.
Will no one listen?
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Joined: 04 November 2005 Posts: 19521 Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
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Hm........
That's what this one has me thinking lol (in a good way)
It leaves me in silent contemplation. In all honesty the poetry flow wasn't your best... but the words... wonderfull message!
Joined: 08 January 2006 Posts: 3132 Location: The Shire
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no, the flow wasnt, i agree....but then, it wasnt supossed to be....
it was supossed to be more of my thoughts, in a poetic way.....
thank you. i'm glad i got you thinking.
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Joined: 04 November 2005 Posts: 19521 Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
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Makes perfect sense. i've done that quite often actually.
Joined: 08 January 2006 Posts: 3132 Location: The Shire
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it's a good way to get it out, i think, to not have to worry about the rhythm....*shrugs* when i have good rhythm, it's not because i tried, it's because the words worked out in my head that way. lol
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i've done that quite often actually.