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Post subject: The Truth  Posted: August 20th, 2008, 9:19 pm |
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Joined: 08 January 2006
Posts: 3132
Location: The Shire
Gender: Female
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I reach for words unspoken,
Haunted by the truth.
Dreams long sought fall, broken,
Deceived by falsified youth.
Well our demon's patience
lies on the waiting list.
The search of the sixth sense
Ends in slit wrists.
The chaos to our order,
The butter to our bread.
The broken tape recorder
Has simply been misled.
We paint on our perfect face,
Buy all the latest trends.
Mistakes are just erased,
There's no such thing as friends.
Survival is a deadly game;
It's every man for himself.
The winner is the first to blame
And wrongly accuse someone else.
Shaking bodies, afraid to speak,
Corrupted by bottled rage.
A twisted form of hide and seek,
Desperation to leave the cage.
Are we lost to our assumptions?
Has the finale come at last?
Should we give in to our sins?
Do we surrender to our past?
Is our strength in one another?
Can we forget the mistakes we've made?
Would you betray your own brother?
Will all those memories fade?
All the questions left unanswered,
All the words we'd like to say.
All the promises we whispered,
All those wasted beautiful days.
Don't leave it to the dust.
Find the voice inside the wind.
Say and do what you must.
Endure until the end.
Live and never look back.
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"Great art is as irrational as great music. It is mad with its own loveliness."
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Post subject: Posted: August 21st, 2008, 10:30 am |
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Joined: 04 November 2005
Posts: 19521
Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
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wow... I don't remember all your work but I think i can say this may be your best I've read yet! I loved it.
It's very dark, yet so so true... and the choice of words was amazing. It flowed nicely and everything. 
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Post subject: Posted: August 21st, 2008, 5:00 pm |
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Joined: 08 January 2006
Posts: 3132
Location: The Shire
Gender: Female
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oh wow. thanks jax. I appreciate it. _________________
"Great art is as irrational as great music. It is mad with its own loveliness."
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Post subject: Posted: September 12th, 2008, 8:22 pm |
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Joined: 30 December 2005
Posts: 2901
Gender: Female
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Wow I think Jax may be right... I think this one might be your best. It makes you think. Very well done.
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"Hogwarts will always be there to welcome you home."
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Post subject: Posted: September 13th, 2008, 1:47 pm |
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Joined: 08 January 2006
Posts: 3132
Location: The Shire
Gender: Female
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aw, thanks arwen.
I appreciate it.
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"Great art is as irrational as great music. It is mad with its own loveliness."
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Post subject: Posted: September 13th, 2008, 2:52 pm |
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Joined: 20 August 2006
Posts: 1426
Location: United States
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Wow...I'm speechless! That was amazing! *gives two thumbs-up*  _________________ 
~A-E twin/father of Vampire Anakin~
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Post subject: Posted: September 13th, 2008, 11:14 pm |
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Joined: 08 January 2006
Posts: 3132
Location: The Shire
Gender: Female
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aw, you're sweet.
thank you
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Post subject: Posted: September 13th, 2008, 11:16 pm |
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Joined: 20 August 2006
Posts: 1426
Location: United States
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Aww...Thanks, I need encouragement. You're welcome!
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~A-E twin/father of Vampire Anakin~
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Post subject: Posted: September 21st, 2008, 9:10 pm |
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Joined: 08 January 2006
Posts: 3132
Location: The Shire
Gender: Female
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Post subject: Posted: September 21st, 2008, 9:11 pm |
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Joined: 08 January 2006
Posts: 3132
Location: The Shire
Gender: Female
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Post subject: Posted: September 29th, 2008, 6:44 pm |
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Joined: 23 May 2006
Posts: 1406
Location: Snape's Dungeon.
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Post subject: Posted: September 29th, 2008, 10:36 pm |
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Joined: 08 January 2006
Posts: 3132
Location: The Shire
Gender: Female
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aw, thank you *blush*
I appreciate it.
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