Joined: 02 November 2008 Posts: 43 Location: Finland
I will post all my poems and shorter stories here... when I am inspired to write them that is.
This is something I wrote a year ago
Torn
The Sea takes us home,
guiding us to love's evergreen dome.
Soon we will meet on the shore
thos that sailed before.
Love and longing will live long
forever will they stay strong.
Divided between the love for mother
and the love for daughter.
Forever will I be torn,
ever since her love was born.
Always will my heart be frail
for Undómiel did not sail.
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Joined: 04 November 2005 Posts: 19521 Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
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Verry lovely.
It's got kind of long lines but you made it work quite nicely. Good read.
And since I haven't seen you around before to say it... WELCOME TO THE FORUM!!!
Joined: 04 November 2005 Posts: 19521 Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
Gender: Male
I'll watch to see if you post anything more. I always enjoy a good read. See ya around the forum. *waves*
Joined: 04 November 2005 Posts: 19521 Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
Gender: Male
I'll watch to see if you post anything more. I always enjoy a good read. See ya around the forum. *waves*
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