Verry lovely.
It's got kind of long lines but you made it work quite nicely. Good read.
And since I haven't seen you around before to say it... WELCOME TO THE FORUM!!!
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| Author: | Elegia [ November 9th, 2008, 3:21 pm ] |
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I will post all my poems and shorter stories here... when I am inspired to write them that is. This is something I wrote a year ago Torn The Sea takes us home, guiding us to love's evergreen dome. Soon we will meet on the shore thos that sailed before. Love and longing will live long forever will they stay strong. Divided between the love for mother and the love for daughter. Forever will I be torn, ever since her love was born. Always will my heart be frail for Undómiel did not sail. |
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ November 10th, 2008, 12:08 pm ] |
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Verry lovely.
It's got kind of long lines but you made it work quite nicely. Good read. And since I haven't seen you around before to say it... WELCOME TO THE FORUM!!!
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| Author: | Elegia [ November 10th, 2008, 12:42 pm ] |
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Thank you. For your words and the welcome.
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ November 10th, 2008, 1:46 pm ] |
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| I'll watch to see if you post anything more. I always enjoy a good read. See ya around the forum. *waves*
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ November 10th, 2008, 1:48 pm ] |
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| I'll watch to see if you post anything more. I always enjoy a good read. See ya around the forum. *waves*
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