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Fight...for what is left.
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Author:  Jax Nova [ February 15th, 2009, 12:08 pm ]
Post subject:  Fight...for what is left.

When the barrows speak,
Will the maiden weep?
Will the winter's chill,
Find the blood to spill?

Can a soul in need,
Find a friend in greed?
Or forgotten souls,
Find the kindled coals?

Will the summer come,
To the lonely one?
Or will the ones who hate,
Delay that soul to late?

Can a soft said word,
Fix a tear only heard.
Can a harsh yelled shout,
Bring the tears about?

But when all is done,
Whether old or young.
I will stand again,
And will not give in!

For fight it may be,
But fight is all that stays.
I will fight to be free,
For the rest of my days!

Author:  Eruraina [ March 5th, 2009, 12:54 pm ]
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Out of all of your poems so far, I have to say this is the best!

I really get the urge to make the last verse into a banner!

Author:  Jax Nova [ March 5th, 2009, 1:14 pm ]
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Realy? wow, i thought this one wasn't up to par. :P I'm happy you liked it so much, though.

Hm... it'd be fine with me if you made a banner out of it. Interesting idea.

Author:  Eruraina [ March 5th, 2009, 1:27 pm ]
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It's the meaning of the poem that got me, and the organized chaos that I felt for it that really drew me in to liking this one!


Cool! I'll show you it when I'm done with the banner! If ever I can get hold of my computer that has photoshop...

Author:  Jax Nova [ March 5th, 2009, 8:15 pm ]
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:)

Alright, I'm excited to see what you come up with for the banner. :)

Author:  Eruraina [ March 7th, 2009, 10:16 pm ]
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And here it is:

Image
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g111/ ... /fight.jpg

I kind of rushed it a bit... but anyway, the pics are from two books of the Shannara series by Terry Brooks.

What do you think, Jax?

Author:  Jax Nova [ March 12th, 2009, 12:22 pm ]
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(Hey, sorry for my long absence on replying but I had some vehicle trouble that left me stranded for the past 5 days! )


On to the banner, however, I like it very much. :D

The grim reaper guy is a pbit creepy, :P but it does fit! :)

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