Arwen-Undomiel.com
https://arwen-undomiel.com/forum/

I dream...
https://arwen-undomiel.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=48&t=19929
Page 1 of 1

Author:  Eruraina [ March 5th, 2009, 1:01 pm ]
Post subject:  I dream...

A poem that came to my head around 1 O'clock last night while I couldn't sleep.

I dream forever
of days to come
bonds to be severed
and tunes I will hum

I dream always
of days long past
what history says
and moments that didn't last

I dream on
of days that are now
where I belong
and what I now vowe

I dream in a world
that no one else can see
in a reality twirled
into fantasy

I dream of unicorn, pheonix, and dragon
of lands never seen
of bards with flagons
and adventures waiting for me

I dream of reality
as harsh as it may be
of whats left of my sanity
and what I can see

I dream of work, food, and play
of the sun on my face
and what comes each day
all with it's own little place

I dream while awake
while the sun is still up
always for sanity's sake
though maybe not when I drink from a cup

I dream at night
when my head's on the pillow
durig the times I have no sight
and my thoughs know no woe

Never will I stay here with me
forever and always my head's in the sky
if you could come to the worlds I see...
You'd dream forever juast as I.

Author:  Jax Nova [ March 5th, 2009, 1:17 pm ]
Post subject: 

I love this poem. :) It describes very much how I am actually.... always dreaming of things that can't be. (not to mention I often lay awake in bed not being able to get to sleep :P )

I really liked this stanze

I dream always
of days long past
what history says
and moments that didn't last




As well as these two...

I dream in a world
that no one else can see
in a reality twirled
into fantasy

I dream of unicorn, pheonix, and dragon
of lands never seen
of bards with flagons
and adventures waiting for me


nice job. :D

Author:  Eruraina [ March 5th, 2009, 1:25 pm ]
Post subject: 

Thanks Jax! Means alot to me that someone likes it! Probably because I don't write that much because I struggle to find the right words... I find it easier to make my meanings with pictures instead most of the time.

Author:  Jax Nova [ March 5th, 2009, 8:17 pm ]
Post subject: 

Yeah, I think it's always hard to find the right words when you don't write much. I still strugle sometimes but I've writen tons and tons of poems only a handfull of which I end up liking.

I'm not very good with pictures... but that's something I think would be fun. But we all have our areas we are better in. :)

Page 1 of 1 All times are UTC - 5 hours [ DST ]
Powered by phpBB © 2000, 2002, 2005, 2007 phpBB Group
http://www.phpbb.com/