Mornie utulie wrote:
Touching.
I have to say the first one is almost liquid (although a little more chaotic and overlapping emotions), it makes the reader (or at least me) feel contemplative but not in a normal sense, I love the fact that it is not linear.
The second is a lot more overwhelming with emotion, and more chaotic, the fire imagery expressing passion wonderfully... I have to say I like the first one more only because the contrast of emotion in the second is only too familiar to me but overlooking my own emotions (that don't quite matter to you, the author) the second one is absolutely amazing.
Thank you very much!
The second one isn't really a love poem, per se, it's also oriented around the emotions nature causes as the first, but a little left over infatuation got mixed in their and made the whole thing turn into a rather crazy meditation on both.
