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 Post subject: Admiral Beau's Lament (PG)
PostPosted: April 4th, 2007, 4:20 pm 
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This is a poem about my freinds horse, Admiral Beau. He die 2 Octobars ago. Please Comment.

The barn is abanded,
the pastures are empty
the young spring fillies have long grown old.
The grass withers as the wind roles by:
a voice so solf and sad it cries.
And under the trees,
the old apple tree
there stands a wood cross
of our greatest loss
for he has faded into the mist
of Autumn’s snow-white Winter shift.

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Anyone going to comment?

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I like the poem. Very solemn.

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I loved the poem. Bravo, very good job, Murtagh.

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gorgeous, very well written, and im sorry for your loss.


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Ohh, that's so sad!!! I love horsys and to think another one died...

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thanks guys.

Beau broke his leg and my friends had to put him down, he was only 26.

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I know what it's like to have an animal put down. My cat wasn't actually put down, but for the longest time we were preparing to... but then we ended up not having to.

Beautiful poem.

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