You're welcome!

I don't have any suggestions for site improvement. It looks really good.

And for your writing, I don't know. ;P Maybe you could have some beta readers to give you feedback on what they like and
don't like about your work. It might be helpful in seeing things you
don't catch on your own or opening you mind to new ways of wording things.

I think the other opinions could be helpful
in boosting creativity.

If you would like to make a living out of it, like if it's your dream, go for it my friend!! It's what my brother in law wants too. He like you has some great story ideas. If it's what you really love chances are you are meant to do it. Never take your deams lightly.
