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Post subject: Posted: June 12th, 2006, 9:28 pm |
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Joined: 01 January 2006 Posts: 3183 Location: Lothlorien
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Excellent start Ellie! I liked the descriptions, ie. "a wrinkle of grief was growing on her forehead". Very good! I would love to hear more!
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Thanks Haldir and Gil! "You said: I know that this will hurt, but if I don't break your heart then things will just get worse..."
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Post subject: Posted: June 13th, 2006, 1:38 pm |
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Joined: 04 June 2005 Posts: 11221 Location: In a world of magic and mystery Country:
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Wow Elegost, I love what I read so far. I especially love your imagery. Great job and I look forward to reading more.
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Post subject: Posted: June 18th, 2006, 4:00 pm |
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Joined: 24 June 2005 Posts: 3759 Location: Berlin Country:
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Wow I really loved what you posted.. it sounds great
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Post subject: Posted: June 19th, 2006, 9:25 pm |
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Joined: 01 January 2006 Posts: 3183 Location: Lothlorien
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*waves frantically* I'm still here! You have a hidden talent, I didn't really know how well you could write, Ellie dear. Very good all around. Hmm, "an elegant hand"? Now I am intrigued!
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Thanks Haldir and Gil! "You said: I know that this will hurt, but if I don't break your heart then things will just get worse..."
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Post subject: Posted: June 20th, 2006, 3:39 pm |
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Joined: 01 January 2006 Posts: 3183 Location: Lothlorien
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Okies. *sits and waits patiently*
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Post subject: Posted: June 21st, 2006, 11:17 am |
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Joined: 24 June 2005 Posts: 3759 Location: Berlin Country:
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Wow very good as well (I mean the next part ya posted..)
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Post subject: Posted: June 21st, 2006, 3:54 pm |
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Joined: 01 January 2006 Posts: 3183 Location: Lothlorien
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Hmm, what is the time setting? My guess would be someone like Arwen, after the crowning of Elessar. Other than that, no clue.
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Post subject: Posted: June 21st, 2006, 4:00 pm |
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Joined: 01 January 2006 Posts: 3183 Location: Lothlorien
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Very well
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Post subject: Posted: June 21st, 2006, 4:18 pm |
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Joined: 01 January 2006 Posts: 3183 Location: Lothlorien
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I must say, I love your writing style. You are making me more curious! Lol!
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Post subject: Posted: June 21st, 2006, 5:35 pm |
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Joined: 03 June 2005 Posts: 13144 Location: Heaven: Rockin' with Severus Snape Country:
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The word has been spread!
Lovely story Ellie, I really like it! Plenty of detail, but not too much to bore me to death, and a really good lead. That lead just really hooked me into the story. I'm really excited to see what you've got next.
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Post subject: Posted: June 23rd, 2006, 3:30 pm |
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Joined: 01 January 2006 Posts: 3183 Location: Lothlorien
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Wonderful as usual, Ellie! What are you going to do with this when its done?
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Post subject: Posted: June 23rd, 2006, 9:37 pm |
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Joined: 01 January 2006 Posts: 3183 Location: Lothlorien
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Yes, it does. Just email Arwen with it. That is where I put my very first one.
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Post subject: Posted: June 23rd, 2006, 9:40 pm |
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Joined: 16 March 2006 Posts: 20465 Location: Gondolin Country:
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shoot Ellie ... your a horribly good writer!
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Post subject: Posted: June 24th, 2006, 8:31 am |
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Joined: 20 January 2006 Posts: 865
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Whoa, it's amazing, you'll for sure be a famous writer in future!
Danny, DaeTirion, Berethor... I've seen those names somewhere else
Keep writing, mate!
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Post subject: Posted: June 24th, 2006, 12:26 pm |
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Joined: 16 March 2006 Posts: 20465 Location: Gondolin Country:
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Haha! Well I look forward to it
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Post subject: Posted: June 25th, 2006, 7:27 pm |
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Joined: 23 June 2006 Posts: 3 Location: Walking through the halls of Minas Tirith
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Sort of a new reader here (I was reading this before I signed up). Awesome story, I love Elegost! I cannot wait until he travles to the north to train with the Dunadan...what time period is this? Frodo's time? Before Frodo's time? Certianly not after Frodo's time I know that.
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