Randomly popped in my head. lemme know wut u think. thanks:)

So many feelings,
Yet no words to express.
So many emotions,
For words I don’t possess.

So many tears,
Yet eyes are dry.
So many fears,
Though I can’t explain why.

So much hurt;
So much pain.
So much fear;
Drives me insane.

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"Great art is as irrational as great music. It is mad with its own loveliness."

Fantastic! The rhyming is also carried out smoothly.

aw, thanks.

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"Great art is as irrational as great music. It is mad with its own loveliness."

Same here. Very lovely. Liked the rythm and rym and all of it. And I really like the picture you chose to put it on as well I think it fits really nicely.

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thanks, jax....i had sum trouble finding a good pic....but once i saw that one, i was like, yup, that's perfect. lol thanks again i appreciate it

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"Great art is as irrational as great music. It is mad with its own loveliness."

Awesome work pip. I love the rhythm and rhyme of the piece. I also love the mysterious feel it has to it as well. Great job!

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AWESOME set by the AMAZING Lembas!!!

thanks

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"Great art is as irrational as great music. It is mad with its own loveliness."

Wow! I love the way you illustrated that one!

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As man, He fled from the stones; but woe to those from whose stony hearts God has fled.~St. Augustine

aw, thank you. i appreciate it

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"Great art is as irrational as great music. It is mad with its own loveliness."