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Post subject: Broken Heart  Posted: November 4th, 2006, 11:23 am |
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Joined: 03 November 2005
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Location: Austria
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Broken Heart
A broken heart feels like...
an extinguished fire, nothing left
but dark ashes and smoke,
you're not able to breathe,
not able to feel anything but pain,
not able to speak anymore...
It feels like...
broken glass, and its splinters
are piercing your heart,
every single part of your soul,
your mind and body,
until nothing works anymore...
It feels like...
a walk in the desert,
no water near you,
and the thirst is the only thing you can feel...
It feels like...
drowning in a deep ocean
with no hope of rescue anymore...
It feels like...
total hopelessness, nothing and no one
there for you to catch you...
A broken heart is the worst thing
that could ever happen to you
and you cannot escape...
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Last edited by Lady Erana on May 9th, 2007, 6:57 am, edited 2 times in total.
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Post subject: Posted: November 4th, 2006, 3:54 pm |
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Joined: 04 November 2005
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Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
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Wow that was very nice.  I can relate to manny of those feeelings and I would concure with the acuracy of those words. Nice job.
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Post subject: Posted: November 5th, 2006, 5:21 am |
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Joined: 03 November 2005
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Location: Austria
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Thank you very much, Jax!
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Post subject: Posted: November 11th, 2006, 3:34 pm |
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Great job Erana. I love poems like that, like they have a repeating line, and such. 
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Post subject: Posted: November 11th, 2006, 3:36 pm |
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Joined: 03 November 2005
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Location: Austria
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Thank you, too, Arya! The funny thing with this poem is that I made it up at school... somehow I thought of that line 'Love hurts' and it wouldn't let me go...  That brought me to my next poem, the last one I posted...  _________________ <center>
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Last edited by Lady Erana on November 11th, 2006, 3:42 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Post subject: Posted: November 11th, 2006, 3:40 pm |
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Joined: 19 March 2006
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A very good poem Erana. True words of your heart  _________________ 
Will be going to London on March of the 30th
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Post subject: Posted: November 11th, 2006, 3:42 pm |
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Joined: 03 November 2005
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Location: Austria
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Indeed. Thank you, Faramir!
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