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Post subject: my little poetry outlet Posted: December 31st, 2005, 12:37 pm |
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Joined: 07 June 2005 Posts: 5272 Location: Texas
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i usually put this stuff in the nazgu club, but now im going to use the proper forum, ill post poetry here every few days, heres one to start
On an endless night All hope fades away
On an endless night All light fails
But on an endless night Light breaks through
But on an endless night Hope rides home
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Post subject: Posted: January 1st, 2006, 11:32 pm |
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Joined: 07 June 2005 Posts: 5272 Location: Texas
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heres another piece related to Narnia
The green fields blossom in and endless Spring
the great trees thrive the flowers bloom
but on a day sad to all
White winter came and frost crept in
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Post subject: Posted: January 2nd, 2006, 9:33 pm |
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good the only problem is that I don't really see it. I feel a little like it's mounful. Is that what you were going for. 'Cause in the book they made Narnia sound beautiful.
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Post subject: Posted: January 2nd, 2006, 10:10 pm |
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Joined: 07 June 2005 Posts: 5272 Location: Texas
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im going for mournful, im trying to get across the sadness of the people of Narnia , not what Narnia looks like
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Post subject: Posted: January 11th, 2006, 11:25 pm |
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Joined: 07 June 2005 Posts: 5272 Location: Texas
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heres a new little thing that i think a person in Narnia would thin kup
Why must flowers In winter die?
Why must trees in great fost fade?
Why must grass, Once so green turn to brown
why must winter cruelest of colds come each year a blight upon the days
Why must christmas greatest of days Come to not on darkest of day
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Post subject: Posted: January 12th, 2006, 2:49 pm |
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Joined: 06 June 2005 Posts: 2584 Location: In my black hole... Country:
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wow....
_________________ Everytime you make a one word post...a cactus dies
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Post subject: Posted: January 12th, 2006, 9:25 pm |
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Joined: 07 June 2005 Posts: 5272 Location: Texas
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thanks, i can't really compare to some other people though 
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Post subject: Posted: January 13th, 2006, 11:33 am |
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Joined: 06 June 2005 Posts: 2584 Location: In my black hole... Country:
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*smiles*
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Post subject: Posted: January 14th, 2006, 12:48 am |
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Joined: 07 June 2005 Posts: 5272 Location: Texas
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*looks at smile and speculates what it means*
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Post subject: Posted: January 15th, 2006, 1:12 pm |
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It's a good smile...
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Post subject: Posted: January 15th, 2006, 1:26 pm |
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Joined: 07 June 2005 Posts: 5272 Location: Texas
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just making sure 
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Post subject: Posted: January 15th, 2006, 1:37 pm |
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Don't worry, I'm not the one to make a fake smile...
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Post subject: Posted: January 24th, 2006, 7:02 pm |
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Joined: 07 June 2005 Posts: 5272 Location: Texas
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heres another poem produced by listening to a song....
Oh old memorys years ever fleeting
Oh why do you have to turn to ash
Oh why must the world come to not
Oh I how i wish to relive past summers
Oh why must it be mans dark fate to forever long for days gone past
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Post subject: Posted: January 24th, 2006, 7:28 pm |
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Joined: 04 November 2005 Posts: 19521 Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
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Post subject: Posted: January 24th, 2006, 7:31 pm |
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Joined: 07 June 2005 Posts: 5272 Location: Texas
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*sigh* all these poems are mournful, I need to listen to some positive songs...(and thanks)
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Post subject: Posted: January 25th, 2006, 11:40 am |
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Joined: 06 June 2005 Posts: 2584 Location: In my black hole... Country:
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 It's okay, you should see the newer-ish poem I wrote...
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