'Twas inspired by Gandalf's words to Frodo about Gollum...

Many that live deserve death
Many that die deserve life
Many that scoff deserve to mourn
Peace is deserved where there is strife

Can you give what they deserve?
Even the wisest cannot see the end.
To deal out death and call it justice
is to make death, not justice, friend

What do you think? Should I make a banner for it?

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Yet never within grasp of it
We have never seen hope defined
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Very nice! I like it. I had to read it through a second time to get the rythm down but that is just because I am not used to reading that styl much. It was good. And I htink macking a banner for it would be a very interesting idea. I would be interested to see how it turned out.

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It's nice, good job!

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good, it just doesn't flow well for me, but I'll read it again and try

I really liked it. What Gandalf tells Frodo about Gollum is like 1 of my favorite parts in bot the books & the movies. I just think the line's so cool. So i say definately make a banner for it!!! I loved it!! (& i'd luv 2 see how it turned out)

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"Great art is as irrational as great music. It is mad with its own loveliness."

Short and sweet. I like it. Though, it does sound as if it is not quite finished, like there is more to come. You might want to work on that.

I think it would a nice banner!

Peace Out,
Tasare

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If you could make it flow just a tiny bit more it would be perfect!! I really like it though, good job.

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"Hogwarts will always be there to welcome you home."

I love it. Nice to see another LotR inspired peace. I think you did very well with it. Keep it up and write more. lol.

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