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Post subject: "The winid is calling. "( a poem)  Posted: February 15th, 2006, 5:43 pm |
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Here is a reandom poem. I felt like writing one so I sat down and thought this up here.
"The Wind Is Calling"
Around the earth is falling,
Sinking very low.
A distant voice is calling,
Biding me to go.
Inside my heart is aching,
My world all but gone.
Hear my spirit breking,
With it's morbid song.
Everything is dying,
My spirit fastly falling.
Afar I hear the crying,
Hear, the wind is calling.
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Post subject: Posted: February 15th, 2006, 10:26 pm |
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wow!
I like this a lot!
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Post subject: Posted: February 16th, 2006, 8:20 pm |
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Thanks. I am writing a book of poetry and was going to post another one similar... but I liked it so much I decided to keep it for my book.
Because I am not sure whether it would be safe to use on in my book that I have used on here... Irealy don't know why it wouldn't but I am peranoid... anyone who could clear that up for me I would GREATLY appriciate it!
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Post subject: Posted: February 20th, 2006, 12:10 pm |
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I don't see any problem w/ it....but if u do put out a book, u have 2 use ur poem "Alone." hehe
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Post subject: Posted: February 20th, 2006, 4:20 pm |
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Yeah. I know. I just was not sure about the ones I have used on here. I don't see nay problem with it either to be honest... but I'm just so paranoid I don't know....
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Post subject: Posted: February 20th, 2006, 4:32 pm |
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ya, I know wut u mean. I'm pretty paranoid about stuff from time 2 time, 2. hehe
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Post subject: Posted: February 20th, 2006, 4:35 pm |
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Well, it's not like I have a lack of poems though... If I need another one I can just go write one. so...
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Post subject: Posted: February 20th, 2006, 4:41 pm |
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I wish i had that problem. lol
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Post subject: Posted: February 20th, 2006, 6:47 pm |
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Well... I have been writing ever since I was like 4-5 years old. Ever since I can remember so.... Enough practice I bet anyone could do it!
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Post subject: Posted: February 22nd, 2006, 7:17 pm |
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I love to write stories & stuff.. I do like all the time. But poetry...well, ya, not my thing.  but it's definately urs, so keep it up!!
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Post subject: Posted: February 22nd, 2006, 10:14 pm |
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lol thanks. I injoy writing stories as well. Tis great fun!
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Post subject: Posted: March 3rd, 2006, 8:53 pm |
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A few days ago in Math Class, I was thinking about all of your poems and then I started just writing... I've written tons since then!! They're not very good or anything... but I do enjoy it!! I write lots of stories, just never poetry before now. 
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Post subject: Posted: March 4th, 2006, 2:40 pm |
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*shivers at the word math*
That's cool. You should post some on here. I would be interested in reading them.
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Post subject: Posted: March 4th, 2006, 11:31 pm |
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ya, me 2! See, I've HAVE tried to write poetry b4...*laughs @ thought* hehe. ya, not pretty. just not my thing. which means u both have 2 right tons so i can read it & enjoy the fact that u guys have such an awesome talent. (assuming urs r good, arwen. lol just kidding. i'm sure they r! ) _________________
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Post subject: Posted: March 5th, 2006, 2:35 pm |
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Well, they're not really all that good....  I'll post one of them up in a few minutes, just so you guys can see it. But really, it's my first time writting poetry, so its not very good.
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Post subject: Posted: March 6th, 2006, 7:18 pm |
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Did read it. Very nice for yor first time writing! You should see some of my first poems... or rather yous houldn't.... lol
But I have been writing poetry since I was around 10 probably so...
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