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 Post subject: ~Witness of My Dreams~ - - a poem
PostPosted: February 14th, 2006, 7:40 pm 
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Once i had a dream , u know , some ppls think i'm mad with these belives in Elves or Tolkien's world :confuzzled: . then in that Dream I saw Im in Arda high up in valinor , as i REALY was there :blink: , at the end something happened that i wont tell you now , it is in these poem. all the poem was exaclty what i Dreamed , but after i woke up , is not true here , there was no a Real Silmarilli of course! :confuzzled:
love to here ur ideas!


"Witness of My Dreams"

In Valinor , up in Elerrina’s* green
From above I stare down at Middle-Earth
There by the wind I honor the World beneath
With a breath I feel my home of Birth.
~Home, home of the love inside me
~Home of my eternal Soul
~I’m going to belive ….
O' Nénar , O' Soronúmë , my Elven stars
Back to my world , Elvenhome I Returned
With tears in eyes I touch grass and the leaves
Enchanted by the magic being Reburned.
~Being, being of the Eldar
~Being of the folkien-Star
~As it was my memories …
Singing and dancing by the Lórellin*
The leaves on the water , the faces so light
Rána* and the Stars covering all over the land
And the Valar watching, over the Music bright.
~Music, Music of the Creation of Arda
~Music of Manwë and Aulë and Varda
~All the Ainúr who sang the Song …
Then I heard there of Ilúvatar the One
“Behold! Go give these witness to those you trust
Sing them the song of the Glory of the Elves
And make them belive they will never be lost. “
~Witness is, witness of all your dreams
~Witness is,your fate as it seems
~On the head of Eärendil…
Then all the Land stay silent
And the Elves end their song
I woke with wonder , and my witness
Was a Silmarill from the Ages of long.

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*Elerrina: The other name of Taniquethil Highest Mount of Arda
*Lórellin: a lake in Aman
*Rána: Elvish name for the Moon

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PostPosted: February 15th, 2006, 5:24 pm 
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Very nice poem! I liked it alot. It ryms good and it has good imagery. (at least for me)

I like the styl as well, not sure if I have ever seen a poem done that way before.

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PostPosted: February 16th, 2006, 11:38 pm 
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*nods* I agree with Jax. I like the style, and it captures your imagination.

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PostPosted: February 16th, 2006, 11:49 pm 
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wonderful stuff, it flows together well!


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