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 Post subject: “Destine to be”
PostPosted: March 30th, 2006, 3:57 pm 
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“Destine to be”

Through pain and sorrow, death and fear,
Facing one more tomorrow, one more year.
A life carved in alone, denying what he is,
Leaving the one he’s known, is truly his.

Forsaking all feeling, to prevent that fate,
Afraid of what fates dealing, and that strain will be to great.
But in the needy time, emerging true and strong,
To deny the ancestral crime, that he’s feared for so long.

Take the life and take the sword,
Make the land your own my lord.
Fight the one who sets on high,
Fire flowing from his eye.
in your might despise his will,
Let him know you’re living still.
So the ring may be destroyed,
And your judgment be employed.
With the one your meant to love,
Sent from spirits up above.
Now in night he can see,
All this was destine to be.


A poem I wrote about the Return of the king mostly. :) Hope you all like it.

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awww *huggles Jax* you're such a good writer!!

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PostPosted: March 31st, 2006, 3:28 pm 
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*hugs mom back* Thanks. :)

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*smiles* you talented little boy!! mommy raised you well!! :)

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PostPosted: March 31st, 2006, 3:32 pm 
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Yes you did. :)

I am planing ot get a book of poetry published maybe sometime this year if I can rais the money!

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ooo how nice!! :blink: would it sell here in ontario? because i would buy it ;)

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good poetry, but just to nitpick, you spelled destiny wrong


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PostPosted: March 31st, 2006, 3:37 pm 
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Thanks. lol that's alright. Since I stink so bad at spelling I welcome people's corections.

*thinks* I did put it through a spell check. *shrugs*

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awww you dont stink at spelling hun!! *hugs Jax* :confuzzled:

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Haldir o Lórien wrote:
ooo how nice!! :blink: would it sell here in ontario? because i would buy it ;)


I am not sure where it would sell but it could be got online on Amazon.com the way I understand it. *shrugs* I will know more when I actually start the process.

lol I don't spell good.

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good luck with your book!
you can spell good when you try, dear ;)

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the spell check program probably thought you ment like the word "destined" except minus the past tense "-ed"


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oh, yeah. lol sorry about that.

Thanks for pointing it out though. :)

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hey, a new one!!! lol i like it. :-D any idea when u'll get it published? i would definately buy it, 2. :-D

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Thanks. :)

Well.... I just finished the book the other day. :)

And now it has to be edited, corected etc.... Then the publishing process I think can take up to 6 months... so it will probably be a while. But I will let everyone know when I get it published. :)

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definately (ya, i totally spelled that wrong....)

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