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Post subject: My cold soul, a poem  Posted: March 31st, 2006, 3:44 pm |
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Joined: 07 June 2005
Posts: 5272
Location: Texas
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My soul is cold
warm fires gone
I lie in my bed
weary eyes shut
My memories bring
back suffering again
I'm tired of lies
sick with deceit
So I lie in my room,
ingnoring the loud knocks
My mind slowly drifting
into uneasy sleep
All peace gone
soul still cold
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Post subject: Posted: March 31st, 2006, 4:10 pm |
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Joined: 04 November 2005
Posts: 19521
Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
Gender: Male
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Great job!  I like that one a lot.
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Post subject: Posted: April 1st, 2006, 4:35 am |
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Joined: 30 October 2005
Posts: 5188
Location: 'Dance like flame cuase theres no gravity, and now I am just a candle trying to stay lit...
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Gender: Female
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Very very good, and deep. Sounds cinda like a poem I wrote once.
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