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Post subject: Posted: April 4th, 2006, 12:57 pm |
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Awesome new character, Aemornion. One of the best (possibly the best) I've seen on this forum.
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Post subject: Posted: April 4th, 2006, 1:40 pm |
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Joined: 08 September 2005 Posts: 3262 Location: Anywhere an assassin or mercenary is needed....
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Sounds great, Aemor!!!! Have you checked out my world yet?... Look for it in the 'New Characters' section, it's under 'The World of Lostarr'..... Please comment and tell me whatcha think!!
 Coffee....
_________________ For God so loved the world, that He gave His only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in Him shall not die, but have everlasting Life. ~John 3:16~
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Post subject: Posted: April 5th, 2006, 5:44 pm |
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Joined: 19 September 2005 Posts: 298
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@ Aerandir - far away from being one of those *laughs*, but thank you alot for the generous compliment. It means alot from someone of your caliber. Honestly I admire also the characters you created, very independent ones and most important, very uniqe ones!
@ Luin - Thanks alot! I did look into it and gave you the comment.
Coffee...yes.... hot please, with cream! 
_________________ I do not love the bright sword for its sharpness, nor the arrow for its swiftness, nor the Warrior for his glory. I love the homeland which they defend.

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Post subject: Posted: April 5th, 2006, 5:50 pm |
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Joined: 08 September 2005 Posts: 3262 Location: Anywhere an assassin or mercenary is needed....
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Heehee.... You must've misunderstood the title.... I was describing the world itself, not the people in it.... Go back and read what I answered to your post....
_________________ For God so loved the world, that He gave His only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in Him shall not die, but have everlasting Life. ~John 3:16~
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Post subject: Posted: April 8th, 2006, 10:04 am |
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Again you prove a great writer.
I will have to read it over again, especially the first part, to get the names and people straight. However, the latter part telling about the death of Ohtarion is very moving. You have the gift of writing - tell us more.
(I'm being dragged off, will comment further later on, if you want it.)
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Post subject: Posted: April 8th, 2006, 1:56 pm |
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Joined: 19 September 2005 Posts: 298
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One brief update considering the character of Aemornion. A new picture can be found of him. For this I thank deeply Silmarewen Idril for spending her valuable time in making it. And here also I will say thank you, most noble and dear friend!
@ Luinnar - aye, did read it.... sorry for the missunderstanding then!
@ Ea - Far from being a great writer, but I thank you non the less for your kind words. The tale still has work to do on its own.... hopefully ill get some time for myself and widen its aspects.
_________________ I do not love the bright sword for its sharpness, nor the arrow for its swiftness, nor the Warrior for his glory. I love the homeland which they defend.

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Post subject: Posted: April 8th, 2006, 2:07 pm |
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Joined: 09 November 2005 Posts: 3289 Location: USA
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*grins* It was my honor, mellon nin... *bows deeply* No need to constantly thank me...
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Post subject: Posted: April 25th, 2006, 5:31 pm |
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Joined: 19 September 2005 Posts: 298
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Alright, made another character for a certain RP, honestly I lack inspiration lately becouse of the work load and this one is one of my worst writes. Also the bio is a bit shorter then the first two.
Feel free to read the first post and give your comments on Dagonet, son of Damrod. Any feedback is highly welcome!
_________________ I do not love the bright sword for its sharpness, nor the arrow for its swiftness, nor the Warrior for his glory. I love the homeland which they defend.

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Post subject: Posted: April 25th, 2006, 5:52 pm |
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Joined: 09 November 2005 Posts: 3289 Location: USA
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Another impressive piece, my friend *smiles* Very good indeed!
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Post subject: Posted: April 29th, 2006, 12:06 pm |
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Joined: 24 October 2005 Posts: 420 Location: Wherever the Road takes me
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*snorts* lacks insparation...that is absolutely brillant!
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Post subject: Posted: May 1st, 2006, 6:06 pm |
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I'm not sure whether you are looking for a certain kind of feedback....?
I like Dagonet, and he is an archer, nice move!
The background info provided is impeccable as always. The [s]incident[/s] accident in the forest makes an interesting basis for... how he may react later on and deal with situations. And it seems an important feature in his personality, in fact it adds another layer to the character making him very credible - at least in my eyes.
True, it isn't your best writing, but even the second best from your hand proves a lot better than many others. 
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