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Post subject: "An Answered Prayer"  Posted: May 23rd, 2006, 7:36 pm |
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I would like to dedicate this poem to pip&leggyluvr and ~*ArwenEvenstar*~
to whom I have become good friends with since joining this forum.
To find the words, it's hard,
To say just what it is.
What healed when it scared,
The works must be His.
Where once I felt alone,
Inside a growing crowd.
Now a light has shone,
Wher my spirit bowed.
Some times it is enough,
To know they are there.
Comforting to spirits rough,
To hear the words "I care."
Whatever way you look,
It's something felt within.
And if it all was took,
I would do it all again.
A friendship is to cherish,
Keep forevermore.
Never let it perish!
Or shut on it the door!
Through good and bad,
Hard times and the dark.
When your sad or mad,
Never drift appart!
Agree to disagree,
If that is what it takes.
It sets the spirit free,
Where else the spirit breaks.
So chrish every friend,
Forever keep on trying.
And to the verry end,
I will cherish mine.
Though I may never,
See you face to face.
I will stay true forever,
Not vanish with no trace.
You mean so much to me,
It's true I will admit.
For this is you see,
For what I prayed to get.
Thank you Father for friends,
And may we all hold dear.
Until our very ends,
And not give in to fear!
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Post subject: Posted: May 23rd, 2006, 9:37 pm |
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awww *tears* that is so lovely
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Post subject: Posted: May 23rd, 2006, 10:20 pm |
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Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
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lol thanks/. 
And the poem goes out to you and all my other friends on here as well.
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Post subject: Posted: May 24th, 2006, 1:56 pm |
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Ah, Jax, that's so sweet!!! I love it!!! I'll always be ur friend!!!  *sniffle* that's def. gotta be the most awesome poem u've ever written!!! _________________ 
"Great art is as irrational as great music. It is mad with its own loveliness."
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Post subject: Posted: May 25th, 2006, 7:00 pm |
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Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
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lol glad you like it. as always.
And same here, always be your friend.
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Post subject: Posted: May 26th, 2006, 1:36 pm |
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I love this stanza:
Though I may never,
See you face to face.
I will stay true forever,
Not vanish with no trace
That's so awesome!!! *hugs Jax* I hate u 4 being able 2 write such good poetry!!!! lol 8) _________________
"Great art is as irrational as great music. It is mad with its own loveliness."
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Post subject: Posted: May 26th, 2006, 7:29 pm |
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Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
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lol is that a good thing or a bad thing?
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Post subject: Posted: May 26th, 2006, 9:24 pm |
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lol. A good thing.  _________________
"Great art is as irrational as great music. It is mad with its own loveliness."
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Post subject: Posted: May 29th, 2006, 6:39 pm |
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Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
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lol alright then.
So where is arwenevenstar? She has not been posting lately.
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Post subject: Posted: May 30th, 2006, 3:34 pm |
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ya, I noticed that. I don't know......*shrugs*
Where r u, Arwen?? 
*reads Jax's friendship poem again* Can i ask u a question? How do u always get everything 2 rhyme (sp?) ???  See, I'm trying 2 write this poem, but I'm stuck b/c I can't think of anything to rhyme!! so i tried 2 change the wording, & still can't think of anything! lol it's very frusturating.....how do u do it??  _________________
"Great art is as irrational as great music. It is mad with its own loveliness."
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Post subject: Posted: May 30th, 2006, 8:03 pm |
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lol well most of the time it just comes out ryming, but when I get stuck I just go through the alphabet saying words that rym starting with all the words that rym starting with A that I can think of then B C D etc...
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Post subject: Posted: May 31st, 2006, 10:39 am |
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lol. see, I do that too, but I can never seem to find a word that fits.....I even have this rhyming dictionary.....lol sounds dumb, but it's pretty cool!!1 u look up a word ending, like ay, & it'll say day, gay, ray, etc. it's pretty cool. but even w/ that, i still have trouble. hmmm.....*shrugs* idk.
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Post subject: Posted: June 2nd, 2006, 9:16 pm |
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Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
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hmm, well sorry thats the only thing I know to tell ya. 
That's sounds pretty cool actually I have seen them before and I think it would be neat to have one.
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Post subject: Posted: June 3rd, 2006, 12:16 am |
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Post subject: Posted: June 3rd, 2006, 1:24 pm |
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Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
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Thanks.
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Post subject: Posted: June 3rd, 2006, 3:12 pm |
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Jax Nova wrote: hmm, well sorry thats the only thing I know to tell ya. That's sounds pretty cool actually I have seen them before and I think it would be neat to have one. *nods* yes, it can be very very helpful. lol b/c it tells u things u never think of. it's not like it goes through w/ every letter of the alphabet. i mean, it does, but then it has other words, too. it's very helpful. 8) _________________
"Great art is as irrational as great music. It is mad with its own loveliness."
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