Its not very good but I just want to see peoples opinion.

Or so they say

Life stopped
Bombs dropped
Life’s changed
Or so they say

Experience used
Minds abused
Thoughts fused
Or so they say

Plans drawn
More born
New dawn
Or so they say

Who knows
Spirit glows
Tears Flow
Or so they say


Order wrote
Democracy broke
Who knows?
Or so they say

News Withdrawn
Families torn
Try to mourn
Or so they say

So they say.

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I saw you look away
Is what you've seen too much to take, or are you blind and seeing nothing?
(I saw you run) I saw you run away
Is what I've done too much to take or are you scared of being nothing?

O r so they say bit at the bottom got on my nerves b4 i finished the poem..so i didn't read it all! Apart from that good

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I LIKED IT!

Thank-you. I was quite pleased with it.

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I saw you look away
Is what you've seen too much to take, or are you blind and seeing nothing?
(I saw you run) I saw you run away
Is what I've done too much to take or are you scared of being nothing?