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Is this a good introduction. please be honest.
Yes it was very good. 27%  27%  [ 3 ]
It was fine 55%  55%  [ 6 ]
It wasnt that good. 18%  18%  [ 2 ]
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SAedd was circled by the orcs with the woman warrior he has seen before. As he tried to fall back, orcs came even in more numbers. So crowded they were. Saedd drew his sword. Somehow somebody helped him and her. They were saved. He followed the girl as she said to him that fall back again. He made a look at the orcs behind of him and Mithrandir. The situation was desperate. They have no chance of being saved as long as no miracle happens. He fastly ran after the girl and the new friend whom he does not know. He tried to shut the door behind to avoid more orcs get in.

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As soon as the three were trough the door, Rinoa helped the male warrior close the door. "We need to set up a small baracade. I'm sure the enemy will bring in rams to break down the door." she said as she and the man put the wooden block that helped keep the door shut. She leaned against the door, tring to come up with another plan, she looked at the male warrior, then to the female elf, and then to Mithrandir. She then hit the back of her head against the door. Nothing came into mind.
Help was desparatly needed and everyone knew it. All the soldiers could do was hope that it came soon.

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*Off topic: Man, has everyone forgotten about this RPG except me? :lol: (waits quietly for someone to continue the story.)*

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The sounds were coming from outside that like Grond, Grond or something this is what Saedd heard it. He wanted to take a look. However, the door was shut and if he goes out the door, everybody will be under a serious danger. So he turned to the female warrior who gave him a hand to shut the door. "Do you hear what I hear??" he asked her who was the closest to him.

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As Rinoa rested against the door, she heard the male warroir ask, "Do you hear what I hear??" Rinoa had not herd anything but the sound of her thought raceing through her head, for many minutes. She stopped thinking for a moment and listened. "I hear it but, do not know what it is," she replied to his question, that last part she said mostly to herself. She was courious but knew just as surely as he did, that if they were to open the doors everyone would be in great danger.

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Simbelmyne came up to the door. It was her last chance to escape from the Orcs that followed her. "Let me in! Let me in, please!" she shouted, hoping that someone would hear her.

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Saedd heard some voice beyond Grond thing. It was a girl's voice who cries out "open the door". He listened more as she cried out more. Saedd turned his head to the soldiers who waits nothing but end their life. Saedd searched for anybody who could help him open the door. "Do you not hear her" he said.

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"Please, open the doors!" Simbelmyne cried, she was so afraid of the orcs who draw nearer and nearer every moment, tears of fear were inher eyes. Someone must be behind this door, someone must hear her!

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Rinoa had went to talk to some of the soldiers. She paused for a moment and herd a woman cry out "open the doors!". As soon as Rinoa was tring to make her way toward the doors the male warrior had said "Do you not hear her" Rinoa finally got back down to the door and looked at him as she said "I will help you open the door. We must be quick." As they removed the wooden block, the door started to open.

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Simbelmyne quickly entered, but when she was inside she cried "Thank you som much for opening the door, but now, please close it again! The orcs are following me!" She helped the man and the woman to close it again. It was really in the very last moment, the orcs came very close and tried to open it again.

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The woman got through the door and said "Thank you so much for opening the door, but now, please close it again! The orcs are following me!" The male warrior and the female that just entered helped Rinoa close the door. The door was almost closed as orcs started to try and open it. The block for the door started to come down, as it did Rinoa took out her bow and shot the orcs that was partially blocking the door from being fully closed. The door was then fully shut and blocked. Rinoa put her bow back and looked at the others, not knowing what to say or do next.

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When the door was fully shut and all orcs forced to stay outside, Simbelmyne breathed a few times to get enough air again in her lungs. Then she said "Thank you for saving my life, warriors of Gondor!" She bowed to them both.

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"Not a problem, my lady." Rinoa said with a bow. "I'm glad to see that we were able to help you and manage to get the door shut." She looked towards the others. "The only question now is what to do next. The door can not hold forever." As she said that something started to ram into the doors.

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"Somebody needs to clear all these orcs before they broke through the gate. I am a volunteer for this job alone. What do you say?? he said. Mithrandir looked at him so you wanna get yourself killed, boy. You have a better idea, Mithrandir. When I find an idea, it is not gonna as bad as yours. I will promise. Saedd was angered of being kidded. So let's wait for them to break through. may be they pass me by and kill you. I am a still volunteer. Anybody else with me??" he asked

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"Me, of course, my lord! I will help you, but I need another few minutes to recover from this attack!" Simbelmyne said, she took out her water bottle and drank a few sips.

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"So I see none of you wanna be a volunteer. Very well then. Turned back to her. "I am very
impressed with that courageous act of yours. Are you okay, Simbelmyne?? by the way."

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