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PostPosted: June 22nd, 2006, 6:50 pm 
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"2 Wills"


What would this be,
If emotion was gone?
Would I then see,
That all this is wrong.

Or would true love,
Be it's embrace?
From God above,
To the two I embrace.

Or is it something,
Lying in between?
Something ringing,
And not to be seen.

How do I know,
What His will is?
How do I know,
If my will is His?

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PostPosted: June 24th, 2006, 11:48 am 
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Oh, i like that!! Especailly the last stanza.....awesoem as usual, Jax!!:)

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Wow Jax. Another awesome poem. I love the emotion behind each stanza and I love your rhyme scheme. Great work! :-D

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A very beautiful poem as well.. I luv it :-D

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Jax, as per usual, your poetry rocks! I don't think I'll come on here anymore cos it makes me feel sorry for my awful attempts at poetry. Did you sort out your book deal yet?

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PostPosted: June 25th, 2006, 3:01 pm 
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HA! were both at it again!
HAve you read any of my new poems Jax?
But THis one of yours is very good!

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ya, how is ur book going, Jax? good i hope, b/c i'm dying to get it & read them!! lol :)

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I'm sorry about that. :( lol But with practice if it is Gods will you CAN be a good poet.


Well, I have decided to wait on the book for a while due to some advice from a contact of mine who has experiance in publishing.

I might self publish if I get the money but I will have to pray about that a lot.

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i'll say a prayer for ya, too!! :)

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I'm sorry about that. :( lol But with practice if it is Gods will you CAN be a good poet.



Don't be sad, you're a natural born poet, I'm not, and I'm over it! Just makes me envious! And I won't say a prayer, against my morals, but I will wish that you sort out your book, cos I can't wait to read it!

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All really takes is practice, though!! I said the same thing, but Jax had to go & be a great poet, & inspire me to write. lol :) I actually wasn't as bad as I thought. @ least try it. *shrugs* U never know wut surprises God has in store for you. :-D

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Ditto. :) Who knows.
If you enjoy it I would say give it a try. But its up to you. lol

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:yes: You'll never know, unless u try!! :-D

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Lovely piece. The last stanza is definently the best... a nice twist of the words. Keep writing and rhyming. ;)

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Very good, as always, Jax. :)

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Glad you all liked it. :) As always.

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