Ok, i've changed that now! Do think it is better now or shall i change it again?

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that's a lot better
but do you mean "of what you used to be" or "use to be"?

Oh sorry that's meant to be "Of what we used to be". I'll change it

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Ahh, I see

*New Poem: about Narnia*

Enchanted World

So hard to sleep at night
I just can't close my eyes
I roll around in my bed
Still trying to get my rest

I feel my heart carry me
To that place i see clearly
What wonderful happens
When you just Believe

I have found a lost world
Everything is so Enchanted
But this world is under a spell
But this place is still Beautiful

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aww, it's wonderful! I like

Good, that's good

*EDIT*
I wrote another poem, i hope this poem inspires each and everyone of you


The Perfect Dream

Beautiful was the stream
Layer out like a dream
For all of my fantasies
All of my precious dreams

The trickle of the stream
Made me feel so free
The warmness of the sun
Made this girl so pleased

How wonderful was the stream
How enchanted it did look
Just like the gorgeous images
In my little, but precious book

The glowing on the stream
And the wind in my hair
Made me feel so, so special
That I really didn't care
What others thought about me

I laid back into the grass
The sweet smell of daisies
Like forever, it would last
I felt so happy, so merry

Such sweet memories as a child
White horses on the deep sea
Wild butterflies in my hair
Is it the place you will find me

Where is your happy place, is it far
Is it a wild dream, a fantasy
Is it somewhere you can see
If you find me there, will I know

My happy place is and always will be
Heaven, I've known it since I was seven
I was a child full of love and grace
God has made me a special place

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I like
I did however, find some tiny spelling mistakes. A trick is to read the poem backwards (the words the right way, of course ). That way you'll be able to see if you've spelled any of the words wrong Hope it helps!

Ok, it also helps if you go on Misrosoft word

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Lol yeah
It was a trick my teacher learned me. Back in the old days, when we weren't allowed to used compies at our exams...

oh, kewl..thankx for the tip

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You're quite welcome. Always glad to help

As for my own writing, I'm kinda working on an idea for a poem - eventually a song, but I'm not quite getting what I want. I've noticed, however, that I get most ideas at night - so I've moved my mother's compy to my room. I got up twice last night to write down ideas

Oh kewl, i use to write poems at night...then my sis got annoyed with me...But now i usally get inspired when i'm walking in the forest with my dog. But i don't have paper and pen so i get really annoyed with myself

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Then you must start bringing paper and a pen! Take it with you everywhere - you never know when you get inspired!

Yeah, i need to get a waterproof pad, coz i got inspired when i went swimming at the beach the other day.

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Lol, you get inspired at the strangest times