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Post subject: Posted: July 21st, 2006, 11:52 am |
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yeah..lol
*EDIT*
New poem
Diving in too deep can I not escape
Fall back, so weak into these huge waves
Lord help me up before I die, I do believe
Oh lord I do believe you are alive
I've fallen into this deep blue see
Will you send an Angel to save me
Oh lord have mercy on you child
Don't let me drown in this place
Again, give me a chance to smile
What is that light I see up ahead
Is my body weakening now
I don't feel alive, am I dead
It's my time to go, slip away
I'm coming to you, I'm on my way
As I come to you in that place
I feel such joy, as angels sing
As they worship you with grace
They bow down to their king
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Post subject: Posted: July 21st, 2006, 11:59 am |
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Aww, it's so beautiful!
(I feel like a teacher >.<) There are some minor writing mistakes, though. You oughta read through it and see if you find them 
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Post subject: Posted: July 21st, 2006, 12:32 pm |
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Is that better?
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Post subject: Posted: July 21st, 2006, 12:36 pm |
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There you go 
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Post subject: Posted: July 23rd, 2006, 11:20 am |
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Thanks..nice banners by the way 
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Post subject: Posted: July 24th, 2006, 4:11 pm |
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Thanks  Haldir made the Lizzie one and The Coughing Nazgul made the Nazgul one 
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Post subject: Posted: July 25th, 2006, 9:25 am |
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Summers day
Summers day, such a lovely sight
Butterfles in the air, blue skies
A far green meadow you see
Where the little rabbits lie
Rushing water in the streams
Flying bees and ladybirds
The tiny creatures of the air
Oh now they do love to sing
Every where i go,every place i see
I will get this vision in my mind
Even when i'm asleep, this i will see
Even in my deepest of all dreams
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Post subject: Posted: July 25th, 2006, 9:33 am |
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It's beautiful
What was the inspiration?
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Post subject: Posted: July 25th, 2006, 10:54 am |
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An lucy banner i was making
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Post subject: Posted: July 25th, 2006, 11:30 am |
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Post subject: Posted: July 26th, 2006, 4:36 pm |
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Kewl...
New poem
A hero
You came from no where
You came to save me
Hid me from the darkness
They couldn't see me
There is a hero in you
It's everything i see
When i look at you
This is what i see
A hero driffted, way away
From the darkness beyond
Till the light of the day
Another way out of here
And you saved my life
Took away all the pain
All the hurt in my life
I will never forget that
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Post subject: Posted: July 26th, 2006, 5:42 pm |
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It's very pretty  I like it very much!
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Post subject: Posted: July 27th, 2006, 12:56 pm |
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Thanx 
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Post subject: Posted: August 1st, 2006, 5:28 pm |
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Old Faith
I've fallen from his arms
I am scared, i am broken
Feeling so alone right now
Like i am dieing and choking
Why have i fallen from him
Did i stop believing
Did i reject the truth?
That i had been reciving
What do you want me do
Lord hear my shaken voice
As i am calling out to you
As i get onto my knees
Begging you to help me see
Shouting for you today
When did i stop to Believe
When did i stop to see
See the light, beyond the dark
All the wickedness of men
When did i fall fot all the lies
When i start to trust all them
Help me to see, the light
Come now, help me
As i fall shakeing without
You, help me to Believe
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