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Post subject: Fear  Posted: July 22nd, 2006, 2:13 pm |
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OK, on this poem i exaggerated (sp?) a little........but here it is.
Fear
Fear
It burns my heart,
everyday,
and every night.
It laughs,
and taunts me.
I can feel it,
hear it,
see it,
smell it,
taste it,
know it.
Fear
It haunts
my dreams
at night,
and takes
hold,
during day.
It won’t leave;
It won’t go away.
I lay awake
at night,
crying,
begging,
for it
to stop.
But it won’t
go away.
Please
let it end;
let it go
away.
Let it
haunt
someone else,
for a change.
Fear
It’s taking hold;
I can’t stop it.
I want it
to end.
But it won’t.
Fear
It’s taken control
of me.
Don’t let it,
you.
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Post subject: Posted: July 22nd, 2006, 2:42 pm |
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I like it, pip!! You captured the feeling well. 
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Post subject: Posted: July 22nd, 2006, 8:36 pm |
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thanks. _________________
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Post subject: Posted: July 23rd, 2006, 11:22 am |
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I like that, it inspired me _________________ <a href="http://www.arwen-undomiel.com/forum/viewtopic.php?t=20020" target="_blank"><img src="http://i43.tinypic.com/2ias6qf.jpg" border="0" alt="COME AND REQUEST SOME PHOTOS, OR JUST BROWSE"></a>
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Post subject: Posted: July 23rd, 2006, 1:27 pm |
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thanks! I'm glad! _________________
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Post subject: Posted: July 23rd, 2006, 1:41 pm |
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Do more poetry...you have wonderful work
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Post subject: Posted: July 23rd, 2006, 2:00 pm |
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Oh, thanks. I have sum that i just havent posted......amybe i will. *shrugs* idk
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Post subject: Posted: July 23rd, 2006, 2:16 pm |
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You really should post it. I'm sure it will be great _________________ <a href="http://www.arwen-undomiel.com/forum/viewtopic.php?t=20020" target="_blank"><img src="http://i43.tinypic.com/2ias6qf.jpg" border="0" alt="COME AND REQUEST SOME PHOTOS, OR JUST BROWSE"></a>
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Post subject: Posted: July 23rd, 2006, 2:23 pm |
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Yes, I want to read more too, Pip.
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Post subject: Posted: July 23rd, 2006, 5:59 pm |
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Aw, thanks guys!! lol  Alright, if u guys want. lol  i'll post sum more.  _________________
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Post subject: Posted: July 24th, 2006, 1:38 pm |
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ok, i'll wait for your poems here
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Post subject: Posted: July 24th, 2006, 1:54 pm |
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I posted 2 in the fan fic/poetry section.........they're called Unfinished, Untitled & In His Arms check 'em out, & let me know wut u think!!! _________________
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Post subject: Posted: July 25th, 2006, 11:34 am |
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Nice job pip!
I am going to ahve to catch up on all you have posted! lol
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Post subject: Posted: July 25th, 2006, 3:33 pm |
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lol. thanks Jax Yes, I've been writing a lot l8ly....not really sure why. *shrugs* _________________
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Post subject: Posted: July 25th, 2006, 8:27 pm |
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I do that sometimes. Unfortunatly, I think bordem and being confused inspires me to write poetry, because typically I would always get ideas during math class, my least favorite subject.
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Post subject: Posted: July 26th, 2006, 8:07 pm |
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lol. yea, i always get them when i go 2 like dancing or singing performances....or like plays & stuff. or sumtimes movies. lol idk y. _________________
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