I am in on this club , I MEAN CAN I JOIN

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Married Dean Winchester 3/18/13 (est. 2005)

I'm sure you can! Welcome!

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We've been forever
yet we've only just begun.
We have come full circle.

Thank you , but what is the all the activeties of this club

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Married Dean Winchester 3/18/13 (est. 2005)

Well, mostly we just share poems we've written, and comment on eachother's poetry. (Like the Inklings, sort of. ) Here's the latest one I've written...

Of Frodo and Arwen

She gave her grace away to him--
It sparkled in her tears:
When white ship passed from Arda's rim,
She'd stay through fading years:
Yet a fateful love within her dwells--
She again forsook bright Valmar's bells,
To release his heart from Morgul spells,
That he should live anew.

They told her, "You must seek the quay"--
He wearied neath his load:
But love will never pass away--
And death would end his road:
To Middle-earth she bound her fate--
He felt the Burden's growing weight--
Its waxing he must soon abate,
If both should live anew.

All light and laughter from him passed--
Her trembling hands grew cold:
As both lay dying at the last--
Lives bound to cursed gold--
The King fought hordes, of vict'ry shorn,
To draw them from the Waste forlorn,
Where the Gardner bore his friend so worn,
That both might live anew.

Two stars in heaven's tapestry,
Like Varda's lights they shine:
He'll sail soon beyond the Sea--
With her loved one she'll entwine:
When Darkness came, it dimmed their sheen,
But Ringbearer and Elvenqueen
Are clad again in Springtime green,
To live and love anew.

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Proud Frolass
Resident Elvengoth

I am writing Poems But not about any LOTR thing

Just My own words , Can I post some

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Married Dean Winchester 3/18/13 (est. 2005)

Of course you can! I'm curious to see some of your poems!



A new one by me:


Eternity's call

Dark night lay round me
as I wakened from sleep.
Faint from a distance
the sound of a voice came to me
never heard, but yet well known
like rising from ancient memories
it echoed in my mind
waiting for me, calling.

And so I got up in the dark
and took my path through woods
passed by long forgotten places
broken buildings whose pointed shapes
glanced through the black veil of night
I did not halt or even look back
I knew where to go where someone was
waiting for me, calling.

At last the trees waned
and like a thousand lights
the reflection of stars far above
lay on the shimmering mirror of an endless sea.
And there, in front of me
out of a dream, as it seemed,
a golden winged ship lay on the shore
waiting for me, calling.

I knew what I had to do
without even a word I stepped forward
and went aboard and never returned.
As the ship silently left the shore
faint in the distance gloomed
the first light of dawn
and I felt that it was
waiting for me, calling.

Slowly the land faded away
and all my past seemed hidden by a veil
there was no reality than this journey
and everything that was lying ahead.
I was sailing from East to West
and saw white seagulls in my company
hearing their endless cry
waiting for me, calling.

Constantly night was drawn away
in the eastern sky grew the light
glittering foam on the dancing waves
like jewels that showed me the way
And as the first sunrays gloomed in the sky
like silver glass in the distance I saw
a far green country with white shores
waiting for me, calling.

As we drew near I could see a small shape
Suddenly a red and golden light loomed
and the sun made her way above the horizon
Now I saw, and I knew
it was you, standing on the shore
arms outstreched, welcoming me home
and understood you had always been
waiting for me, calling.

Parted we will be never again...

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We've been forever
yet we've only just begun.
We have come full circle.

Ok here is one , I hope you like it

I will pass , it will pass

It will pass , it will pass
My life and yours , will pass

People comes and others go
We will pass , like every one before us
Passed

Every one pass , I will pass , you will pass
And our life which became our pain
Will pass
Without cure we will pass

Love is our cure , so did you found it to pass
Because without it you will not pass

O love , love is the right pass ,
To cure the pain to pass
Or pain will last , and will not pass
That is how you will see ,
From your past .

But I am telling you I will pass , you will pass
It will pass , but with without love
We will feel pain , while we pass

It will pass , we all mortals so we will pass
Our pain will not last
It will pass , it will pass
Like a trian it will pass
May be you catching it , or may be not
But any way , it will pass
Even if you let it to pass , without hope love and friendshipe
This long crowl life will pass
It will pass , it will pass , through the rain
We will pass , I will pass , and the long life will pass

Through the geat , we will pass
But do not be late to pass
Because we all sould pass
So be the first to pass
To get rid of pain
Be the first to
Pass

It will psaa , it will pass our lives will pass
So learn from your pain
It will not last
We will not last
Because we all will
Pass

Like some one said passera , passera
Even if you only sing
LA , LA , LA

It will pass , and it is ok to take your time
Before your lives pass
But at the end it will pass

Through the rift between us we will pass
Rift full of memories will not last
It will pass , it will pass

But learn from it before it pass , and believe in you
Life will not last
It will pass , it will pass

Like they said passera , life will pass
Without we even feel or know
It will pass , not one will last


It will pass , it will pass our joy and happiness
Will not last for ever ,
O who will last ?
So it will pass , slowly or fast
It I will pass
Because no thing will last
It will pass , it will pass

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Married Dean Winchester 3/18/13 (est. 2005)

Wow, that has a lot of play on words and interesting rhyme. I like what i think the poem is trying to say--that while everything will pass away, what matters is that we love and are loved.
Forever: As i said in the Elijah/Frodo club, very nice. It's a lot like what i would write.

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Proud Frolass
Resident Elvengoth

Thank you , Thank you a lot , that's the comments I wants on my poetry Coz I kind Give up writing coz i think I am Bad writer

& yes I meant what you said coz all we Have to hold on on this mortel life is to love & to be loved , & forgot about what ever hurts coz all of that will pass

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Married Dean Winchester 3/18/13 (est. 2005)

I love your poem, AT! The form is interesting, too!

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We've been forever
yet we've only just begun.
We have come full circle.

Thank you so much

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Married Dean Winchester 3/18/13 (est. 2005)

You're welcome. Some of the best advice i can give you (or anyone) is: don't get discouraged. Poetry takes practice.

Speaking of which, I wrote one a few days back which is from Frodo's point of view, when Sam's holding him on Mount Doom. (I love that scene. ) It's actually a song (as opposed to a poem), inspired by Evanescence's My Last Breath. It has a lot more blank verse than i usually write, but i'm happy with how it turned out.

Sweet Sunshine

I feel your arms about me--
My last defense against the Dark:
Your heart resounds and leads my own,
And by your tears, I know you hark

To the voice that is dying
(Fading to silence)--
To the soul that is sighing
(My final breath):
To the heart that is crying
"Return to me myself!"--
It echoes through the Void...

Hold on to all my being,
And tell me who I am again:
Speak my name when I forget--
Your tears, they fall like summer rain

For the voice that is dying
(Fading to silence)--
For the soul that is sighing
(My final breath):
For the heart that is crying
"Return to me myself!"--
It echoes through the Void...

Sweet Sunshine, come find me--
Lost and so lonely:
Wake me from this nightmare!

You will not let me falter--
I see it in your gentle eyes:
You carry me unto the Flame--
And by your courage, let me rise

For my voice, it is dying
(Fading to silence)--
My soul, it is sighing
(My final breath):
And my heart, it is crying,
"Return to me myself!"--
It echoes through the Void...

But I know you hear me--
With love you bandage all my wounds:
Bear me with you to the End--
My Road upon you rests,
Sweet Sunshine.

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Proud Frolass
Resident Elvengoth

Great Poem , Keep Going

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Married Dean Winchester 3/18/13 (est. 2005)

There is some amazing poetry here. It makes me feel really guilty since I haven't been writing for aeons! Well, I seem to be lacking hte inspiration *blush and grin*

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I love your poem, Eariel! I love how you repeated that one stanza over and over again, and that effect with the parantheses was refreshing as well. it's also nice how you made "Sweet Sunshine" the last line as it's the title of the poem (really...? how observant of me). I like how you gave it enough rhyme and rhythm to make it flow by smoothly.

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Thanks! It's actually meant as a song, so that stanza was the chorus. (The parentheses thing was inspired by the line "Hiding in a hollow tree (come find me)" in My Last Breath. I love that song.) I wasn't sure at first whether 'sweet sunshine' would fit as the last line, but i already had it earlier in the song, and i decided i liked it in there both times, as well as for the title.
Arawn, don't feel guilty! We all go through phases where we don't write as much (or at all). Inspiration comes and goes.
Thanks Alatariel, i will keep going.

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