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Post subject: One Last Step  Posted: September 21st, 2006, 5:40 pm |
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<center>Get up now, get to the end
Dont give up now, your almost there
If you stumble and fall,
with your face in the earth,
Ill be the one, who will come and help you up
Your almost there, almost to the end
Just a few more steps, and your there.
Ignore the teasing,
Ignore the taunting
Keep your eyes steadily straight,
and You'll make it
See, your almost there
You did it in the end
Three more steps...and your there
Just one more step...
you can do it..
but that last step,
never happened...</center>
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Post subject: Posted: September 22nd, 2006, 6:31 am |
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Joined: 03 November 2005
Posts: 9566
Location: Austria
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That's a beautiful poem, Nienor, beautiful and sad!
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Post subject: Posted: September 22nd, 2006, 5:50 pm |
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thank-you, Erana 
I reckon most ppl wont read it
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Post subject: Posted: September 23rd, 2006, 12:52 am |
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Joined: 09 August 2006
Posts: 6728
Gender: Female
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Aw, it's so beautiful...and sad like Erana said. It's really good!
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Post subject: Posted: September 23rd, 2006, 4:11 pm |
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thanks Aranel
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Post subject: Posted: September 23rd, 2006, 6:08 pm |
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Joined: 08 January 2006
Posts: 3132
Location: The Shire
Gender: Female
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aw, that's really sad & depressing.........but good, though. I like it!  _________________ 
"Great art is as irrational as great music. It is mad with its own loveliness."
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Post subject: Posted: September 23rd, 2006, 10:12 pm |
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thank u
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