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 Post subject: Calm - - - by Haldir o Lórien
PostPosted: September 27th, 2006, 7:17 pm 
Aredhel Ar-Feiniel
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I did this for an in-class assignment ... it sounds a bit pathetic.

Calm
I am calm
Not the irate bully on the schoolyard
terrorizing children for power
Not calm enough to lie on a beach oblivious
to the world around me
Not calm enough to watch someone fall
without moving a finger
But just wander through a forest on a cool fall evening
with the colourful leaves blowing lightly about your figure
Calm like a little river on a warm
summer day
Calm like the long thin blades of green grass
tilting from the light subtle breeze
I let myself be swept away by the carefree
bliss of my calm and jovial game of a life.

- - - Haldir o Lórien

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PostPosted: September 28th, 2006, 10:13 am 
Aranel Fae
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It's beautiful Haldir! Don't doubt your work. :P

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Aramel Elyanwe
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I LOVE it, Haldir! :-D Although it doesn't discribe me - :boing:


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Very good Ducky! Let out your inner poet... :D The imagery is excellent, I truly enjoyed it!

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Thanks Haldir and Gil!
"You said: I know that this will hurt, but if I don't break your heart then things will just get worse..."
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Very nice. :)

Has lovely imagry.

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