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Post subject: 2 + 2 = 5 Posted: October 1st, 2006, 10:47 am |
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The Void of Chaos
A twisting infinate space
That pushed against the mind
A thing without sunstance or face
That watched you from behind
A Chaos which threated to engulf
The Void in which it screamed
The tragedy of the self
The nightmare of the dream. (TM)
Meditation
Black is not white and white is not black
Hate is not love and if love is not hate
Fear is not joy and joy is not fear
Then what is the mind, but a joyous tear?(TM)
_________________  Made by Lembas
Last edited by Anduril Vanlhach on October 5th, 2006, 4:01 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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Post subject: Posted: October 1st, 2006, 11:39 am |
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aww..thats a sad poem !!! its great Anduril
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Post subject: Posted: October 1st, 2006, 3:48 pm |
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thanks Truenarn, but its not ment to be sad, its ment to be a reflection of the inner soal of the teenager, the conflicit inside us all, the balance bettwen dark and light and how they are in fact the same thing, destroying everything once that fact is realised. This is one of those few poems where you can read a lot into it.
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Post subject: Posted: October 1st, 2006, 3:55 pm |
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LOL....yeah..2+2=4!!!
maybe just to get this thread attetion..it sure drew my attetion
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Post subject: Posted: October 1st, 2006, 4:05 pm |
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yeah, and also in 1984, thats what the Party eventually make Winston belive in the end, its the twisting of the obviose truth.
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Post subject: Posted: October 2nd, 2006, 2:01 pm |
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Joined: 24 January 2006 Posts: 7390 Country:
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thankyou.
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Post subject: Posted: October 2nd, 2006, 3:22 pm |
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Joined: 04 November 2005 Posts: 19521 Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
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Nice job anduril... And I can see what you mean by being able to read into it. I could get several things out of it.. a lot of things actually. lol But all the same nicely done. 
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Post subject: Posted: October 3rd, 2006, 4:10 pm |
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thanks...i have my own interpretation, but i want everyone to take away something indivigual from it. I can't change the world, but maybe i can influence a few peole in some small way.
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Post subject: Posted: October 4th, 2006, 6:41 pm |
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Joined: 04 November 2005 Posts: 19521 Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
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Yeah. 
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Post subject: Posted: October 5th, 2006, 4:00 pm |
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Meditation
Black is not white and white is not black
Hate is not love and if love is not hate
Fear is not joy and joy is not fear
Then what is the mind, but a joyous tear?
_________________  Made by Lembas
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Post subject: Posted: October 5th, 2006, 5:43 pm |
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Joined: 04 November 2005 Posts: 19521 Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
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*claps* That's cool, I like it. Nice work. 
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Post subject: Posted: October 6th, 2006, 5:17 pm |
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Joined: 24 January 2006 Posts: 7390 Country:
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thankyou nothing on your'e stuff of course, but i am slightly obsssed with oppasits being the smae thing, so most of my work is like that.
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