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Post subject: My drivelings *3 are up now*  Posted: September 30th, 2006, 10:27 pm |
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Joined: 07 June 2005
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Location: Texas
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This name is self-explanatory, I will edit the title post now and then and add little story bits when I get in a writing mood.
Ravings
Why am I confused with this accursed haze? I must be rid of it, or I shall go mad. This curse that afflicts humanity, it stops me at every corner, eating at my sanity. I try to learn, then I do, but i do not, the fog keeping true meaning far away. I must be rid of man's curse, or I shall lose hold. I must be free!
Leto
A feeling of pain, then nothing. Nothing but fading into oblivion. He had been important in life, but in death he could not resist the
abyss' call. "So it went with the dead", thought Leto, but he had accomplished something, he had set humanity on the Golden Path. Or had he?.
It nagged at his mind, so near to the final fall. What if my people destroy themselves still? One of the pieces of his mind said "It does
not concern us, why bother?" The Emperor was still awash with terror as he responded "What if the machines do destroy them?"
The annoyed resident in his mind said "Then your work is undone, but stop worrying, just embrace your long awaited peace."
Leto said "Y...yes, I must for our own good, thank you al-...." Thus faded the savior of human kind into the void as he spoke his final word.
More Ravings
Everyone is pulling me down! Accurse this generation! They only destroy what our forefathers have built. When will all of this ignorance end! It must happen before it's too late. The cancer must be remedied! One must stand for the improvement of our people, but no one will. I sense a bleak future for our world, but maybe we shall be rid of the great fog that besets us ,so that we may survive!
Last edited by Witch_King_of_Angmar on October 7th, 2006, 4:47 pm, edited 12 times in total.
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Post subject: Posted: October 1st, 2006, 1:21 pm |
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Sounds kool ^_^ I loove Reading any type of stories
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Post subject: Posted: October 1st, 2006, 1:54 pm |
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Ok, well just don't expect anything too soon, my writing moods are few and far between.
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Post subject: Posted: October 1st, 2006, 3:18 pm |
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Post subject: Posted: October 2nd, 2006, 5:53 pm |
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New drivel posted, weird thoughts on the phsychological barriers of humanity.
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Post subject: Posted: October 3rd, 2006, 6:13 pm |
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Ooohhh...that was very nice!
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Post subject: Posted: October 4th, 2006, 9:53 pm |
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Post subject: Posted: October 4th, 2006, 10:48 pm |
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Location: The Old Navy of Gondor
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That piece of writing is very nice! I like the part where you say it's a "curse that afflicts humanity" You have a nice way about your words. Keep it up!
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Post subject: Posted: October 7th, 2006, 4:48 pm |
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Post subject: Posted: October 27th, 2006, 7:08 pm |
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*reads them over* way with words indeed, keep it up.
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