OK, I'm not sure if I've posted this or not.....if so, just ignore this post. If not, well then here it is. let me know wut u think!!



My heart is aching
with sorrow and pain.
And it’s all because of you;
You drive me insane.

How is it that you
have hurt me so?
When you haven’t done anything….
I’m filled with woe.

All you do is smile at me;
A simple, basic thing.
But it’s enough to drive me crazy;
Enough to make my heart sting.

I love you, I hate you.
You’re the worst, You’re the best.
You’re wonderful, You’re horrible.
I’m cursed, I’m blessed.

I once thought that I loved you,
But now I’m not so sure.
What if you don’t feel the same back?
Or what if you’re love is impure?

My soul is tortured & wretched.
I just can not decide.
I need someone I can trust;
In whom I know I can confide.

I once thought that I could trust you,
But now I am afraid.
What if you won’t be loyal?
What if I’m just a trade?

What if you’ll simply settle for me,
because I asked you first?
I don’t know if I could live with that.
I think my heart would burst.
I’m not even aloud to like you,
According to what my parents say.
But if we were really in love,
I think I would anyway.

So the question on my mind is this:
Am I or am I not in love with you?
And what’s more, that I want to know, is,
If so, do you love me too?

But I fear that I shall never find out,
How it is you truly feel.
For my true feelings, to you,
I shall never reveal.

But I still wish I could take a look,
Deep inside your mind.
Because I can’t help but wonder, if I knew you felt the same,
Would I risk it all, & leave everything else behind?

I want to give you up,
But if you feel the same way,
Would I admit to you my feelings?
Would I not be afraid to say?

So I sit here, and I dream,
That what I wish you’d feel is true.
And I sit here, and I wonder…
Wonder if you love me too.

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"Great art is as irrational as great music. It is mad with its own loveliness."

Ahhhhhh I lost my poem book I'm so sad
But here is a little from what I can remember.

When we walk together
you take my hand in yours
And we walk as one.
never letting go.


Thats all i can remember so yha omg i have to find that, but pip you know what my room looks like see ya!!!

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Diamond

Aw, that's so sweet!! You better find it, missy!! lol hey, next time just pm me, though, k? lol & yes, I know wut ur room looks like!! SCARY!!! lol Well, i'll ttyl. bye!

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"Great art is as irrational as great music. It is mad with its own loveliness."

Verry nicely done! And all too real to be quite honest.

I must say you do very well at describing emotion.

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Visit The Varsian Kingdom!

Thanks jax I have heard a lot from pip&leggylover about the poetry that you write. I have looked at some of it, and it's amazing! Oh yha if you havn't noticed pip and i are bff's!! Lol.

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Diamond

go us!! lol & thanks jax

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"Great art is as irrational as great music. It is mad with its own loveliness."

Thanks, glad you liked my poetry. And Welcome to the forum! Hope to see you around. *waves*

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Visit The Varsian Kingdom!

I told u his poems rocked!! lol

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"Great art is as irrational as great music. It is mad with its own loveliness."

I like it, Pip!! Like Jax said, very real to life- it tells the story really well, if that makes sense.

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"Hogwarts will always be there to welcome you home."

yeah that does make sense, & thx.

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"Great art is as irrational as great music. It is mad with its own loveliness."