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Is this a good introduction. please be honest.
Yes it was very good. 27%  27%  [ 3 ]
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It wasnt that good. 18%  18%  [ 2 ]
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"Huh" Saedd looked at her he could not understand what she said to him. His wound seemed bleeding again he realized that when he looked at his hand that covered the wound not to bleed. With the help of Simbelmyne. he can barely walk

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Simbelmyne noticed the blood on Saedd's hands and that he struggled to walk. "Saedd, it's only a few more meters, then we are safe!" she said, trying to encourage him.

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Rinoa fought with all her strength, but she began to realize how hopeless this was starting to become as her men started to fall one-by-one. In her condition it was only a matter of time before she would fall as well. She prayed that help would come soon, and that Simbelmyne and Seadd would make it safely through the third gate.

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At last they reached the third gate and Simbelmyne helped Saedd to sit down. When she looked over her shoulder towards Rinoa, she decided to help her. Though it seemed hopeless to fight all these orcs, at least there was a little hope that they wouldn't break this gate too soon as well.
She ran back, took out her sword and began to fight again.

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Rinoa saw Simbelmyne come rushing toward her to help fight off the orcs. As she came near her she looked at Simbelmyne and said, "What are you doing here? You should have stayed behind the gate."

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"You need help! You are wounded yourself, Saedd is safe behind the gate, so there is no need for me in staying there!" Simbelmyne answered.

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She looked at Simbelmyne and smiled, "Thank you for comeing back, unfortunatly this is becomeing even more of a hopeless campain the longer we stay out here. The orcs keep comeing one after the other." She looked around and saw that the gates were starting to close. "The gates are closeing....I said that I would keep the orcs off of you till you reached the gates.....now that's done. If we go now we can make it through before the gates compleatly close."

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"Well, then come!" Erana said to her, killed an orc who came towards her and then turned to the gate again. She grabbed Rinoa's hand and said "Come, we have to hurry!"

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Rinoa ran with Simbelmyne and she shouted behind her "Rangers! Fall back to the Third Gate!"

Everyone ran with all thier might. the orcs followed and once the orcs were in reach, a hail of arrows went by. They passed through the door a few seconds before they closed. Rinoa went against a wall and just sat there for the time being.

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Simbelmyne took a deep breath and then turned towards Rinoa. "Are you alright?" she asked her while quickly looking around to where Saedd was.

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She looked at Simbelmyne, and said, "I have to admit that I'm pritty badly wounded. I think I've lost a little too much blood but, I think I'll be alright." she smiled as she got up and continued, "I can still walk. Where is Seadd?"
There were many people back behind the gate, Rinoa knew that he was probably against a wall somewhere. Simbelmyne and Rinoa started to look for him.

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Simbelmyne looked around, looking for Saedd. "The last I saw him he was at that wall."she said and pointed in the direction. There were too many people standing at the gate to see anything.
At that moment she could hear a loud "bump" at the doors. This made her stand. The orcs must be already there again, trying to pass the gate.

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Saedd got up from where he was laid down by Simbelmyne currently holding his bandaged wound. He was not feeling like himself anymore soemhow his sight was cloudy, he could not hear, feel even walk sometimes trip himself and fell on the floor. His legs could not move right. However, he forced him to walk away at least where the people won't run crazily. Saedd pushed the people in his way looking for some familiar faces.

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Simbelmyne looked back into the crowd and started moving away from the gate, which turned out to be quite tough. There were so many soldiers running around that she nearly was knocked to the ground several times. At last she spotted Saedd not far away from her. When she got to him she said "Saedd, are you alright?"

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Rinoa was relieved that they found Seadd. Rinoa looked at him closer and said, "You need help, badly." She was worried about the orcs banging on the gate, she knew that eventually they would break through. Almost everyone was badly wounded and needed help, it was not just Seadd. Rinoa began to wonder how much longer they all could hold out. She looked at the gate and the pounding continued as she said, "Is help ever going to arrive? Or do we all have to die first?" Rinoa was strong but now she was starting to lose all the hope that she had left. "What to do now?"

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Simbelmyne thought for a moment and then said:" Do we have anything that could help strengthen the gate? This would give us time to regain strenght again for another fight..."
Simbelmyne still got hope that Rohan will come to the aid of Gondor, but now she doubted if they will come soon enough...

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