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 Post subject: A Depressing Poem..
PostPosted: October 24th, 2006, 8:11 pm 


Since I am depressed, here is this:
Death in eyes,
Icy cold stare..
Stainless blood
unreasoned love.
Sorrowful life,
painful goings,
dont look at me,
because I'll be going.

Gnawed teeth,
black skin,
burning fire,
help me and I'll live.

Meanful glares,
piercing looks,
hatred fills the air
with your mere look...


Last edited by Guest on October 26th, 2006, 3:47 pm, edited 2 times in total.

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PostPosted: October 25th, 2006, 5:50 pm 


any comments..?


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PostPosted: October 27th, 2006, 3:25 pm 


Does anyone have any comments, please?

You all are gonna make me cry...:(


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PostPosted: October 31st, 2006, 3:37 am 
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Wow-that really made me sad. However, I love the dark imagery in the piece. The words convey your meaning perfectly. Keep up the great work TN! :-D

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PostPosted: October 31st, 2006, 1:52 pm 


thanks Elen! :hug:


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