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Post subject: Does anyone Care? {A Poem}  Posted: September 29th, 2006, 10:51 pm |
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Does anyone care
what I think?
What I do?
What I say
I feel like no
one does care,
and that I am not loved
at all.
Do you care at all?
Does anyone even
aknowledge my
presence?
No.
No one does.
No cares,
and no one
ever will...
its short. I know. Not all poems have to be long...
Last edited by Guest on October 31st, 2006, 1:52 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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Post subject: Posted: September 30th, 2006, 8:40 pm |
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No comments??? hhhm...
for shame.. 
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Post subject: Posted: October 5th, 2006, 7:36 pm |
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NO ONE HAS EVEN BOTHRED TO READ IT???
*cries sooo hard*
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Post subject: Posted: October 6th, 2006, 5:09 pm |
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Hey, lol *reads it*
A nice poem but a very sad one. And I agree, not all poems have to be long. It is my personal prefrance when reading poetry to have shorter poems.
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Post subject: Posted: October 6th, 2006, 5:18 pm |
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i agree with jax, its very good, how did you feel when you wrote it, what inspired you to write it, how did you feel after you'd written it?
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Post subject: Posted: October 6th, 2006, 5:23 pm |
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yes, not all poems have to be long......& it is very sad. I think we all feel this way at one point or another....I really like it. Keep it up!  _________________ 
"Great art is as irrational as great music. It is mad with its own loveliness."
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Post subject: Posted: October 6th, 2006, 5:52 pm |
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YAY!! some1 read my poem after it has been up for weeks!!
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Post subject: Posted: October 9th, 2006, 9:31 am |
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Good poem... I think a lot of us can relate to it _________________  Faith isn't the ability to believe long and far into the misty future.
It's simply taking God at His Word and taking the next step Joni Erickson Tada
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Post subject: Posted: October 16th, 2006, 6:32 pm |
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It's short, to the point, very relatiable to a lot if not most and all people. Good job!
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Post subject: Posted: October 22nd, 2006, 11:52 am |
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thanks to both of ya's
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Post subject: Posted: October 30th, 2006, 7:28 pm |
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sniff. that's how i feel right now.
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Post subject: Posted: October 31st, 2006, 3:39 am |
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Nice poem TN and I believe that almost everyone (if not everyone) can relate to the feeling at one point or another. I also tend to like to read shorter poems, and you captured the emotion of the piece very well. Great job!  _________________ 
AWESOME set by the AMAZING Lembas!!!
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