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Post subject: Posted: November 3rd, 2006, 7:57 pm |
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"What... you don't like this vacation?" Alex asked, shocked, at Nessa. "I'm having the absolute time of my life!"
Something broke the water with a small splash. Alex whirled around. "Did you hear - "
Without warning, what appeared to be a very real and very alive sea serpent exploded from the water. The scientific name for this aquatic, predatious dinosaur was "pleisosaur."
But, being the idiot that he was, Alex couldn't possibly know that.
"Holy crap! Sea monster!" he yelled, falling backwards as the long-necked thing loomed over him and opened its mouth of rather sharp fangs.
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Post subject: Posted: November 3rd, 2006, 8:01 pm |
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Nessa yelled, more out of shock than anything, and scuttled away clumsily. She craned her neck to have a look around the large monster and shouted to the others, "It's got flippers! Move away, it won't be able to come after you very fast!"
She herself, of course, stayed exactly where she was.
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Post subject: Posted: November 4th, 2006, 3:05 am |
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Jimmy looked up. His mouth fell agape and his eyes widened half their normal size. Then, in one victorious, brave, courageous action, Jimmy screamed for his dear life....
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Post subject: Posted: November 4th, 2006, 3:18 am |
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Mark's feet were frozen where he stood. He screamed loudly and continued to stare at the massive beast before him. His body shook with fear as he felt his stomach arrive in his throat.
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Post subject: Posted: November 4th, 2006, 1:41 pm |
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"Mark, move!" shrieked Nessa, making furious motions toward him. "Don't stand there like an idiot! It - will - eat - you!"
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Post subject: Posted: November 4th, 2006, 2:45 pm |
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Chris stared at the sea monster-beast-thing, nothing could suprise him anymore.. "Mark, get out of there!" And as the kid just stayed where was, Chris growled and jumped on his feet to drag Mark out of there. But as he jumped he forgot about the higher roots of the tree and he stumbled and fell on the ground. He didn't stand up..
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Post subject: Posted: November 4th, 2006, 8:40 pm |
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In a completely unanticipated move, the pleisosaur's sinuous tail whipped up and around, knocking the two nearest humans off their feet. Those two humans just so happened to be Alex and Mark.
The pleisosaur lunged for Mark. Eyes widening, Alex dove, lost his balance, and...
Tripped and landed with a splash into the river, taking Mark down with him. The river's coercive current immediately seized hold, dragging them downstream with the pleisosaur swift in pursuit.
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Post subject: Posted: November 4th, 2006, 9:28 pm |
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Nessa squeezed her eyes shut in terror, waiting for them to scream as they were messily devoured by the prehistoric monster. She heaved a hysterical breath, trying hard not to burst into panicked tears, and peeked through her fingers. They weren't dead yet. That could only be a good thing.
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Post subject: Posted: November 5th, 2006, 9:40 am |
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"Mark!! Alex!" Chris shouted as he saw them being dragged in the stream. He scrambled to his feet and looked at Jimmy, who was still unable to move and Nessa, who looked petrified, and started running over the riverbank downstream. He needed something to pull them out.. But he had no rope, no branche.. Chris sprinted to catch up with them and in the distance he noticed some rocks, closely posiotned to the water's surface. Unaware of the monster that was coming closer to Alex and Mark in his pursuit, he jumped on the rocks and reached for the water.
"Grab my hand!" he shouted, not knowing if they could even hear him.
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Post subject: Posted: November 5th, 2006, 11:20 am |
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Alex made a grab for Chris's hand as he shot past but missed. Meanwhile, the pleisosaur was trailing them almost lazily, flicking its tail now and then to set off more currents.
The water rippled ahead of him. Then, bursting out of the river... was another stupid, killjoy, maneating sea monster. The second pleisosaur sniffed around for a moment, catching an unfamiliar whiff of something that smelled like meat...
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Post subject: Posted: November 5th, 2006, 11:32 am |
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Chris cursed. Another sea monster. Didn't they have any luck this day?
And while he sprinted towards another creeek he unfastened his belt. Jumping a few paces into the river until the water was till his knees, hewaited for them to pass by again. "Grab this!" he yelled again. "Come on.." he mumbled. The seamonsters were closing them in and Chris didn't know if he would have another chance to reach for them...
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Post subject: Posted: November 6th, 2006, 2:12 am |
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Jimmy stared in utter fear as the rest of the company disappeared down the river. "HEY!" He shouted loudly above the chaos, "Don't leave me dudes!"
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Post subject: Posted: November 6th, 2006, 4:11 am |
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Mark's face was the face of fear as he floated down the river. "Help! Help!" he shouted, but then he would disappear underwater for a couple seconds before resurfacing.
As Mark approached the second large beast, he struggled to stay afloat, gasp for air, and swim away. However, none of this things were working. The current was much too strong on his small light weighted body.
As he was being pulled along, he saw Alex up ahead. He quickly wrapped his arms around his neck and held on for dear life. By doing this, he pulled Alex underwater with him.
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Post subject: Posted: November 6th, 2006, 7:15 pm |
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[we need some kind of plot... I'm going to make Alex and Mark be carried off by a pterodactyl if that's all right]
Alex's lunge for Chris's belt was painfully terminated by the weight of a ten year old boy hanging onto his neck. Flailing, he went under. But though he may have been lanky, he was still strong. Ten seconds later, both of them broke the surface with communal gasps for air.
The current pulled them further downstream. The pleisosaurs trailed them, growling and nipping at each other. Their thrashing tails sent up waves that repeatedly drove Alex and Mark back under.
Then it hit him - Were the pleisosaurs fighting for food dominance?
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Post subject: Posted: November 6th, 2006, 7:19 pm |
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((Lol sounds good to me))
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Post subject: Posted: November 7th, 2006, 4:18 am |
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(Ha ha, I don't think Jimmy minds. Ha ha!)
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