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Post subject: "Horror" (typoes and etc. fixed)  Posted: November 7th, 2006, 8:45 pm |
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Joined: 07 June 2005
Posts: 5272
Location: Texas
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Pallid moon shines,
Dreary house still.
A shadow passes,
Crying innocence.
Blood is spilled,
Blades soaked in gore.
Phantoms screech,
Hiding dead faces.
Thunder explodes,
Grim abode exposed.
A skull lies barren,
Demanding its due.
Souls wail,
My heart beats fast.
Death arrives,
Scythe in hand.
Despaired I cry,
"Horror!"
My light lost
In reaper's shade.
Last edited by Witch_King_of_Angmar on November 11th, 2006, 10:05 pm, edited 4 times in total.
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Post subject: Posted: November 11th, 2006, 5:54 pm |
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Excellent!! I totally love scary, death poems. 
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Post subject: Re: Horror Posted: November 11th, 2006, 9:51 pm |
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Location: Beneath the old dusty grand piano above the violin shop
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Witch_King_of_Angmar wrote: Palid moon shines,
Dreary house still.
A skull lies barren,
Demanding its due.
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I love that line! That was definately horrific, if you don't mind my saying so. It was very terse and very well written, and said so much without sounding really wordy. Well done! You know you can write poetry when it sends shivers up someone's spine...   _________________ 
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As man, He fled from the stones; but woe to those from whose stony hearts God has fled.~St. Augustine
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Post subject: Posted: November 11th, 2006, 10:02 pm |
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Location: Texas
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Thank you, this little poem came after an intense Edgar Allan Poe reading session.
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Post subject: Posted: November 13th, 2006, 6:25 pm |
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A Poe fan?????? Goodness!! I love Edgar Allen Poe's writing. Have you read, "The Masque of Red Death" by him? Ooooh... veeery creepy. Still, now I can really see how that poem could be Poe inspired. _________________
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As man, He fled from the stones; but woe to those from whose stony hearts God has fled.~St. Augustine
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Post subject: Posted: November 13th, 2006, 8:43 pm |
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Yes, I've read it several times, have you read "The City In the Sea"?
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Post subject: Posted: November 14th, 2006, 4:55 pm |
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City in the Sea? No, I actually haven't but I would love to. Now I think I'll make a point to check it out! Do you like any of his poetry, Poe's that is? _________________
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As man, He fled from the stones; but woe to those from whose stony hearts God has fled.~St. Augustine
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