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 Post subject: You dont care
PostPosted: November 25th, 2006, 4:15 pm 


You dont
appreciate me
enough. You
dont care about me,
or what I do.

But you used to,
until you changed.
Went back to your
old ways...
back to the dark.

It's too hard for
you to crawl back
to the light. Even
if I tried to help you,
you wouldn't appreciate
my care for you.

Now no one cares
because of you. You,
whom I've always thought
would care for me. Now
you've fallen into the shadows,
you've messed up this time.
You dont know...how
your changed affected me
in Life.


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PostPosted: November 25th, 2006, 8:08 pm 
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I like it! :-D

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PostPosted: November 25th, 2006, 9:26 pm 


Thanks, good to get at least one reply.

love your avvy by the way :lol:


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PostPosted: November 26th, 2006, 9:20 pm 
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I like your poem...can definitely relate.

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PostPosted: November 27th, 2006, 3:44 pm 
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So can I. That how I feel right now.

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PostPosted: November 27th, 2006, 5:36 pm 


thanks everyone. :) :hug:


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PostPosted: November 29th, 2006, 8:35 pm 
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Please put a rating for your poem! Thank you!

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PostPosted: December 10th, 2006, 2:49 pm 
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Wow! Awesome poem! (I can totally relate.) Keep on writing, you're good at it! :)

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