I needed to put my feelings on paper so it became this.. Forgive me my grammar mistakes


That shiny glinstering in your green eyes,
Always make me wonder.
Is this just another lie?
Or is there truth hidden in that lovely smile?
And when your lips softly touched my hand,
I silently hoped it was more than an act,
Did you behave different from what you meant?
And the day after,
Did you even remember me?
I still felt your touch,
Did you realise this could never be?
But no matter what you feel,
This will never last.
How I wish this could be true,
I never felt like this before present or past.
I just need to forget

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O children, lift up your voice, lift up your voice,
Children, rejoice, rejoice..



It doesn't matter you don't believe in God, He believes in you.

wow I loved it ;it was..... wow..*think up better adjectives*

It's very sad.....i'm guessing thsi is a personal experience, since u said u needed 2 get ur feeling on paper....i'm sorry....*hugs* i can relate, in a way, & it's very...sad.....

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"Great art is as irrational as great music. It is mad with its own loveliness."

The reason I said I loved it because I knew it was sad I like depressing poems I know that's weird but I'm different I'm sort of a depressing person

me 2....i like sad things. lol

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"Great art is as irrational as great music. It is mad with its own loveliness."

Thanks guys..

I really felt sad.. so yeah.. it's indeed a little depressing.. but the truth is, I only like sad poems..

I know.. I'm crazy

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O children, lift up your voice, lift up your voice,
Children, rejoice, rejoice..



It doesn't matter you don't believe in God, He believes in you.

no ur not, i generally do as well. lol

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"Great art is as irrational as great music. It is mad with its own loveliness."

yeah I love depresing poems too I wrote a few myself ;my friends said they were good but I thought a little differently

did u post 'em? i'd luv 2 read 'em.....
the way i look at it is, wut's the point of a happy poem? lol Seriosuly, though, wut locked up, secret emotion does that convey? Cheerfullness? Idk about ne1 else, but i'm nvr hesitant to let happiness show....it's the sorrowful, bitter feelings that need to be put on paper....idk, maybe it's just me, but that's the way i feel. -shrugs-

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"Great art is as irrational as great music. It is mad with its own loveliness."