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Post subject:  Posted: September 9th, 2005, 9:01 pm |
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Beri has a point...
And suspenders! hehe... great job on the poem? its a poem right *goes and checks previous posts* Yeah its a poem..just my lack of memory... school takes up it all! arg...
Hey Witchy what's your book about? Oh and my fav part of the poem is the same as Beri's I like the wording in it!
Nazgul don't sleep?!?!  woah... nobody sent me that memo!?! I've been losing precious maiming and toturing! _________________ <center> Proud Member many Clubs (specially the Nazgul Club) Nazgul #3
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Post subject: Posted: September 9th, 2005, 10:02 pm |
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Just as a tip i'm a boy *runs away very fast*
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Post subject: Posted: September 9th, 2005, 11:24 pm |
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its called Ancient Songs and i havent really decided if its during or after the poem, if anyone wants to suggest plz tell
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Post subject: Posted: September 10th, 2005, 1:11 am |
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Tanthoronial wrote: Nazgul don't sleep?!?! woah... nobody sent me that memo!?! I've been losing precious maiming and toturing! Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz....
*wakes up*
I was sleeping!
but anyway.... is there a particular thing to discuss or are we just babbling? 
oh... witch king... nice... _________________ 
Let him curse my name
On these blood stained pages of misery
Let him call me a tyrant so cruel
Let him curse my name, but remember the truth!
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Post subject: Posted: September 10th, 2005, 4:30 am |
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*storms in angrily, clothes torn and face pale*
*sighs and throws herself in the conveniently placed red couch*
I've been fighting this apparent virus all day....it just turned out to be evilier than I.... *more heavy sighing* It seems to have taken over my Internet Explorer browser completely and partly MSN Explorer whick I am using now in order to be able to get online at all.... *screams and yells in frustration*
Nice poem Witchy! Tell us more about your ideas and thoughts on the book and we'll better be able to give suggestions!
*sees squirrel*
*thinks squirrel is cute*
*pats squirrel on the head*
*realizes squirrel is a boy*
*wonders what squirrel is doing here in the eviliest place on A-U*
*fears that squirrel might be evil*
*considers whether to keep squirrel as a mascot*
Memo to all Nazgul.
Nazgul don't sleep, they are blind to the real world and (*points to Kitoky* Our very own Kitty is a good example of that) and in addition they're neither living nor dead - pretty cool, huh
*goes off in search for the much advertised Dwarven realm*
EDIT: Ok, I registered, now I'll just have to wait... and wait... to be let in
*walks around impatiently in front of the gate of Moria mumbling Mellon occasionally knocking on the door with her staff*
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Post subject: Posted: September 10th, 2005, 9:23 am |
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Eä wrote:
*goes off in search for the much advertised Dwarven realm*
EDIT: Ok, I registered, now I'll just have to wait... and wait... to be let in
*walks around impatiently in front of the gate of Moria mumbling Mellon occasionally knocking on the door with her staff*
 You guys are great! Really you are. I have such fun here. *tortures Hobbit* Thanks for registering Ea. Sorry it took me a while to let you in..but your in now!  _________________ 
^ By me and my SS *squiggle hugs*
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Post subject: Posted: September 10th, 2005, 11:43 am |
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ive just drawn up a beginning for the book, its right in the first verse of this poem, its focused on the king of the kingdom farthest north, hes having a conversation with his wife in a courtyard under a full moon about rumors from the north, im wondering if he should go to a feast and then his kingdom falls under attack, or he gos to sleep and fall under attack the next day
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Post subject: Posted: September 10th, 2005, 2:46 pm |
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Feast and attack! Feast and attack! _________________
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Post subject: Posted: September 10th, 2005, 5:25 pm |
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k, and just so you know, the enemy is the "risen" referred to in the poem(aka undead), oh, and hears a poem about the origin of the world
The Beginning:
Father stood
alone in dark
So he raised
rocky pinnacle
And atop it
World was made
River was set
around old world
endlessly rushing
'round old world
The Father then forged
out of purest gold
Nairue-Nune
Guardians of the Earth
Out of iron
mountain folk came
strong in body
mighty in wrath
out of copper
came least of them
Aurisenya, Humanity
and mighty father
laid in slumber
while earth prospered
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Post subject: Posted: September 10th, 2005, 5:58 pm |
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I agree with Johnny's Fan -- Feast and attack!
You're such a great poet Witch King!
Out of iron
mountain folk came
strong in body
mighty in wrath
I really like that part!
((there's always a paticular part in poems that I like the best so I'll probably be doing this with every poem you post  ))
I never though about whether Nazgûl sleep or not...but come to think of it I can't picture a Nazgûl sleeping so I guess it makes sense that they don't.
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Post subject: Posted: September 10th, 2005, 6:15 pm |
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Exactly..I mean what size bed would they use...single....double....king size...would they sleep on a couch...a chair...the floor...upright...floating... ....nahhh...
By they way...I shall now be known by all...as....*drum roll*........*further drum roll*.....*louder drum roll*....as...hmmm...what was I saying.....*thinks*...errrmmm....Binky the Clown?...no that's not right...  ....errrr....hmmm....OH YEAH!! I shall now be know as....JF...there you go. Wasn't that worth waiting for eh? It's just easier for you guys to right when you agree with me...which you always do as I'm always right...maybe.... _________________
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Post subject: Posted: September 10th, 2005, 6:44 pm |
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Johnny's Fan wrote: Exactly..I mean what size bed would they use...single....double....king size...would they sleep on a couch...a chair...the floor...upright...floating... ....nahhh.. Yeah I went through all the possibilities in my head but nope it just doesn't work
JF sounds good
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Post subject: Posted: September 10th, 2005, 10:10 pm |
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do they sleep standing up?Im also emending this part
River was set
around old world
endlessly rushing
'round old world
to this
River was set
around dark world
endlessly rushing
'round green earth
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Post subject: Posted: September 10th, 2005, 11:59 pm |
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Witch_King_of_Angmar wrote: k, and just so you know, the enemy is the "risen" referred to in the poem(aka undead), oh, and hears a poem about the origin of the world
The Beginning:
Father stood
alone in dark
So he raised
rocky pinnacle
And atop it
World was made
River was set
around old world
endlessly rushing
'round old world
The Father then forged
out of purest gold
Nairue-Nune
Guardians of the Earth
Out of iron
mountain folk came
strong in body
mighty in wrath
out of copper
came least of them
Aurisenya, Humanity
and mighty father
laid in slumber
while earth prospered
This is a really cool poem! _________________ 
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Thank you, to everyone who made these wonderful banners for me.
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Post subject: Posted: September 11th, 2005, 4:40 am |
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Johnny's Fan wrote: You guys are great! Really you are. I have such fun here. *tortures Hobbit* Thanks for registering Ea. Sorry it took me a while to let you in..but your in now! Thanky, thanks....I'm....uhm... honored to be a part of an...uhm... dwarven community....!  _________________ >>Be the change you wish to see in the world<<
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Post subject: Posted: September 11th, 2005, 6:23 am |
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dwarwen? what do they have to do with anything? 
anyway...
I`m bloody tired now... and usually... I don`t why, but miscellaous randomness is boring now for me.... _________________
Let him curse my name
On these blood stained pages of misery
Let him call me a tyrant so cruel
Let him curse my name, but remember the truth!
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