Pintel shook his head. "Don't be such a downer. Anamaria's still coming, remember? She'll get 'ere, she promised."

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"oh" Will was silent. "that's a little strange.... but lucky for you." he forced a smile for Vari even though his mind was spinning. "really? it must...."

Will was suddenly interrupted by the sound of a pair of quickly moving feet down the ally. He instinctivly grabbed Vari and pulled her into a hiding position. The footsteps stopped. "hello? was someone there?" came a worried female voice. "........ Will?"




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this is where I'm gonna introduce my second all-time OC:

Carmon Victoria Applegate

appearance:
eyes: ocean blue
hair: blonde
skin: fair

http://www.celebscentral.net/images/users/5925/200515/7-13.jpg

http://www.celebscentral.net/images/users/5925/200515/5-16.jpg
(only of course you need to envision her in 18th century fashion )

Characteristics: carefree, happy, adventurous, boisterous, ready to help

Clothes and style: normally a fancy dress like the other girls but sometimes she will wear her brother's breeches and loose shirts

Siblings: Nicolas

Age: 20

Weapons: none, however if called on she won't shy away of using a gun

History for both Carmon and Nicolas:
Their parents were both born and lived their lives in a small part of England. After their marriage they settled down and raised their family. Their father was a merchant and their mother was a seamstress. Their childhood was not poor but not wealthy, just middle of the road. However, when Cole was 13 and Carmon was 14 their father died and they were forced to move because their mother couldn't take care of them where she was. They made the long trek to the New World where their mother thought things might be easier. They moved about for several years before their mother met a wealthy Englishman and fell in love with him. After their mother's marriage they moved to the Caribbean. Carmon and Cole's feelings about their mother's husband are less than enthusiastic or welcoming. They view him as a wealthy snob trying to take the position of their father, and they've also overheard him talking and they know he's really a nasty man at heart. (and I'm still working on the rest....)

(I was lazy and just copied and pasted it from my thread in the other section so it encludes Cole in it too.... hope no one minds )


ok, Carmon might start out as a Mary-Sue type but please don't make fun of her yet... I promise I will work on improving her. but I thought the name up and couldn't help but want to try her out and see where she goes... she's not exactly as well thought out as Charlotte is in Aramel's RP but as I said I will work on her...... hope this is ok with everyone and no-one has a big problem with her. (btw, if anyone has any comments on what might make her better feel free to PM me )

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James stared at the documents which the Governor just had signed. He wasn't able to look the man in the face. "Those were my wishes too.." he replied quietly. There was a moment of silnce but the Governor interrupted his thoughts by wishing him well. "Right, I won't keep you any longer sir" the Commedore nodded. He took the papers from the desk and exited the study.

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O children, lift up your voice, lift up your voice,
Children, rejoice, rejoice..



It doesn't matter you don't believe in God, He believes in you.

Ok, to keep going with Keyara I'm gonna do a little bit with Mr. Big Burly English Officer.

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An English officer entered Lord Beckett's office and scanned the room until his eyes landed on Keyara. He cleared his throat, "ah-hem, Miss?" he waited until he was sure he had gotten her attention. "Lord Beckett's clerk has informed me you are to go on the Lord's ship, The Endeavour." He smiled, bowed quickly and walked out, expecting her to follow.


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Will continued to wait in silence for just a little while longer, he never removed his hand from Vari's mouth. "y-yes?" he slowly got up but still made sure Vari stayed on the ground. He didn't want her to be found out and he also didn't want to be found with her in an ally and alone.


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oh, and also I've started a thread for all my OCs... so you guys can go there and comment... it would be very much appreciated. (btw, great job everyone! Keep up the good work! )

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Meet me in the gutter, make the devil your friend
Just remember what I said, cause it isn't over yet

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Ragetti sat down, sighing, "I know. But she has lied before."

"I heard that, Ragetti." came the familiar voice of Anamaria. She slipped around the corner, dragging the key dog with her. Snaching the keys from its mouth she opened the doors of the cells. "Quickly!" She hissed at the pirates, before she was almost smothered in Ragetti's embrace. "Let's get outta here."



Gov. Swann stared after the Commadore, shaking his head sadly. He was a fine man, one that would have made a fine son-in-law. Well... no use crying over spilled milk. He turned back to the window and brooded.

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The Seemingly Nice But Actually Really Nasty Nazgul
School ate my life. *sigh*

Oh, my gosh Aramel! Reading what you just wrote about Keyara's thoughts.... oh, I can just imagine Beckett's fury! lol I like it!

btw, everyone, I updated Carmon's bio a bit... hopefully it's a little better for now.

oh, and I'm also going to add:

Nicolas Applegate (often just called Cole)

Appearence:
hair: dark, dark brown
eyes: dark blue
skin: fair

Age: 19

Characteristics: bold, adventurous (like his sister), (still needing further evaluation on the rest...)

Clothes: a loose fitting shirt and plain breeches when he can get away with it, but on most occasions he wears a fancy waistcoat, overcoat, and everything else expected of a fine gentleman

Siblings: Carmon

Weapons: a good sword and a pistol

History for both Carmon and Nicolas:
Their parents were both born and lived their lives in a small part of England. After their marriage they settled down and raised their family. Their father was a merchant and their mother was a seamstress. Their childhood was not poor but not wealthy, just middle of the road. However, when Cole was 13 and Carmon was 14 their father died and they were forced to move because their mother couldn't take care of them where she was. They made the long trek to the New World where their mother thought things might be easier. They moved about for several years before their mother met a wealthy Englishman and fell in love with him. After their mother's marriage they moved to the Caribbean. Carmon and Cole's feelings about their mother's husband are less than enthusiastic or welcoming. They view him as a wealthy snob trying to take the position of their father, and they've also overheard him talking and they know he's really a nasty man at heart. (and I'm still working on the rest....)

to this story... their history is the same, yes. That's because they're brother and sister. Oh, and in the other RP you will see him because he's just recently died in that one.
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"Will, why are you being so hesitant? What are...." the voice suddenly stopped at the slight noise Vari had let slip. "wait, who's back there with you?" the girl came and peered in for a closer look.

"oh" Will sighed and shook his head while he let out all the nervousness he had been storing up in one chuckle. "it's just you." He reached down and helped Vari up off the cold cobblestone alley floor. "there's no reason we - she - should be hiding from you, I guess." the girl gave him a smile full of mischief and then turned to Vari.

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Meet me in the gutter, make the devil your friend
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The Commodore nodded to the butler and said: "Thanks John, I'll see myself out." His eyes wondered to the staircase, half hoping to see Elizabeth. Carefully he put away the documents and decided he would see Gillette for there was still alot to do for tommorow's executions. Again he glanced over his shoulder to the stair but then he shook his head. What are you doing? he thought by himself and his hand reached for the handle of the door. What he'd thought he could find here was gone.

[ Perhaps Eliza can address him one way or the other? ]

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O children, lift up your voice, lift up your voice,
Children, rejoice, rejoice..



It doesn't matter you don't believe in God, He believes in you.

Elizabeth watched from the safety of shadows at the top of the staircase as Commodore Norrington glanced in the direction of her hiding place. What could he want? she wondered. As he turned the door handle her curiousity overcame her and she quietly descended the staircase, asking, "Did you want something, Commodore?"

[Is that what you meant, Will? Or something else entirely? Sorry, I've been a bit out of it lately...]

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Pippin of Herenya's Line - "...give nothing back!"
Got fed up and eloped with Ragetti 1-3-08
PHYLLIS, THE ANTI-SUSPIAN!

Oooo, the suspence of a good Norrie/Lizzie scene!



(something like that.... although I know it's not too different from what he's planning on doing to her )

"hello" the girl gave Vari a shy (ish) smile and turned to Will. "who is this, Will? Oh, and I was looking for you, like everyone else, because of what happened earlier with Jack Sparrow and all." Carmon's eyes shined at the adventure and daring deeds Will had shown just that day. Before Will could respond or hardly make any motion at all Carmon addressed Vari again. "I'm Carmon... "

"wait, Carm, everyone's looking for me?" At Carmon's nod Will looked a little nervous. For obvious, and maybe some not so obvious reasons.

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From the place Beckett stood he could see one of his many soldiers leading Keyara onto his grand, sparkling ship. He smiled to himself. This would be easy enough to get her to believe he was going to help her get back at her sister for being a pirate and on top of it she would get the Dead Man's Chest for him.... although he wasn't quite sure if he trusted her that much yet. Beckett thought about how ignorant this poor girl was and he almost felt sorry for using her... almost.

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Meet me in the gutter, make the devil your friend
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(( You're so good at Beckett PD! And yes Anië that was perfectly fine As PD said, the conversation could be very interesting. Btw.. does Carmon fancy Will? ))

James's heart leaped as he suddenly heard her voice. Slowly he lowered his hand and turned around. Elizabeth descended the stairs, looking even more beautiful than usual he thought. Do you want something Commodore? So she did watch him as he was about to leave.
"No.." he answered with a steady voice. "I mean yes." he quickly added. He stared at the floor, frowning as if he had found something there what had caught his interest but when he felt Elizabeth's stare and looked up at her again, in her eyes. Those beautiful eyes. What could he say to her? She'd chosen Will over him

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O children, lift up your voice, lift up your voice,
Children, rejoice, rejoice..



It doesn't matter you don't believe in God, He believes in you.

A sudden stab of pity flashed through Elizabeth when she saw the look in the Commodore's eyes. It was a mixture of many things: his pain from her rejection, his regret at not being the right man for her, and the depression that often comes from unrequited love. For an instant she wondered what it would have been like to go through with her promise to marry him: James was a wonderful man, honourable and loyal, and would probably make an excellent husband. But then she thought of Will and instantly knew that she'd made the right choice. That didn't stop the awkwardness between her and James though. Coughing softly, she murmured, "James, I'm so sorry for lying to you like that. I do care for you, but not the way I care for Will. But I know I shouldn't have gotten your hopes up like that, only to dash them against rocks. Please forgive me, if you can."

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Pippin of Herenya's Line - "...give nothing back!"
Got fed up and eloped with Ragetti 1-3-08
PHYLLIS, THE ANTI-SUSPIAN!

(:blush: awww, thanks!!! You do an awesome Norrie too!
Well, sorta... kinda like a brother and sister thing. )


"Vari, it's very nice to meet you too." Carmon gave Vari another smile before she quickly turned and shot Will a small, quick look full of questions and wondering.
Will's eyes met Carmon's for only a second before he looked back at Vari as she addressed him. "I thought you knew Jack was here... I -he escaped hanging earlier..."
"and from the sounds of it, it was quite a show." Carmon enthusiastically informed Vari while Will looked a little uneasy. "but anyway what are you two doing back here? Do you live here, Vari? In Port Royal?"

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Lord Beckett continued to keep his eyes on Keyara until she was aboard the ship, however there was other business to attend to. He almost turned when he noticed she was left alone on the deck of his ship. He had planned on her being shown into a cabin and left in it so she couldn't cause whatever trouble she may feel the need to cause. This wasn't exactly going as planned.
"ah-hem, sir, Lord Beckett?"
The voice of one of his officers came from behind. With some reluctance Beckett turned around to see what the problem was, and to make sure Ms. Pierce was directed to a cabin as soon as possible.

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Chase a couple hearts, we could leave 'em in shreds
Meet me in the gutter, make the devil your friend
Just remember what I said, cause it isn't over yet

Get.Lost.In.The.Dark.To.Find.Yourself
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