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Post subject:  Posted: January 11th, 2008, 9:50 pm |
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( ok i'm sorry but i have say something.this is very un...POTC like. the story line is lacking, no pirate would really steal kids and then try and brib their parents for money. their pirates...they could go steal the money if they wanted to. they should be bribing them for charts or maps or something, to some kind of treasure...make this more interesting.
thanks  ))
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Post subject: Posted: January 12th, 2008, 12:51 am |
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Will smiled and laughed softly at his wife and her comment about them being Turners. It was brilliant. He held his wife tightly and said, "I don't ever want to let you go...I will never let you go." He told her, whispering again.
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Drake looked at Claudia and said, "Captain?" He snorted. "I am no captain! I am simply....temporaily." He added.
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Post subject: Posted: January 12th, 2008, 9:40 am |
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The pirate in love Emily? And Jupitar had called her a bad lier. She watched the exchange from were she sat. The pain was starting to make her queasy.
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Post subject: Posted: January 12th, 2008, 12:00 pm |
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The small matted fur ball scrambled from its hidding place and picked up the key. It quickly got out of the way and cowered back into the shadows.
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Post subject: Posted: January 12th, 2008, 3:20 pm |
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Jupiter watched the dog for a moment, then turned her attention back to the people. "We still wouldn't want them killed if we are to bribe them get the maps to Cortez's treasure. So as to end this quarrel, I think the Turners should be kept alive. No matter how much they annoy the bloody hell out of us."
[[ As much as I don't want to say this about the roleplay; I agree with Lady_Raelyn ]]
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Post subject: Posted: January 12th, 2008, 5:33 pm |
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Emily glared at Jupiter waiting for the captain to speak.
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Post subject: Posted: January 15th, 2008, 8:56 pm |
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Alex glared at Emily. She longed to kill the insolent little wench, but would have to do whatever it was the captain decided.
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Post subject: Posted: January 16th, 2008, 7:22 pm |
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(She lives! Yay! XD We can wait until then.)
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Post subject: Posted: January 17th, 2008, 10:07 am |
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Post subject: Posted: January 17th, 2008, 6:54 pm |
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(I don't think it's that unpiratical. It's done by people today, and I certainly wouldn't put it past a pirate in need of monetary resources. But I'll go with whatever is decided. XD)
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Post subject: Posted: January 17th, 2008, 7:34 pm |
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[[Aye, I saw that, Tur.  And I like Alanna's idea about Cortez...  ]]
Benjamin gritted his yellow teeth. "If ye all don't stop this mindless arguin', the sharks are goin' to be havin' a midnight snack!" He waited until everyone was quiet to continue. "Not a word out of any of ye! Got it?"
Claudia nodded silently but glared angrily at Jupiter and Alex. They were the whole start of this problem, the reason why the Captain couldn't trust anyone aboard anymore. Motioning to Lotty, she began up the stairs to the main deck. Anywhere away from those troublemakers would be best to go.
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Calliope shrugged at Drake. "Well, whatever you are, what are my orders, sir?" She asked again, searching his face and waiting patiently.
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Post subject: Posted: January 17th, 2008, 10:04 pm |
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Emily sighed. she still stood waiting for something more to happen.
she looked down at Mary. hoping her leg would hold up.
she thought about what had just happend. <i> cortez's gold...the cursed gold..</i> the priate in her rose up. she smiled for a moment then wiped the look off of her face before anyone saw it.
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Post subject: Posted: January 17th, 2008, 10:14 pm |
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Alex raised her chin slightly, her defiant nature rearing up within her. She met the captain's eyes evenly, waiting for him to speak again. She would not test his patience. Captain Benjamin was not a patient man, she had learned that much in her experience aboard. She glanced at Jupiter, hoping she would do the same. Her eyes flicked now to Claudia. She glared muderously at her. She was one of the crew members that she would classify as naive, soft-hearted. She could not abide by a naive, soft-hearted pirate.
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Post subject: Posted: January 17th, 2008, 11:30 pm |
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(huzzah for teh Ara!! so we're changing the story slightly? that's cool sounding with me... )
Elizabeth forced a sad smile on her face gazed out at the tossing waves of the ocean. She didn't say anything in response, she didn't need to. Thoughts were spinning through her head. She just wished she could get rid of them and things would return to normal. She wanted, no, needed her children. After some time she forced herself out of Will's warm embrace and walked, as if in a dream, across the deck. She wasn't sure where she was going, but she needed to walk and think this through. Her head hurt from lack of sleep and worrying.
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Lotty looked over at the Ben for a brief moment before quickly hurrying up the stairs behind Claudia. She didn't look at the rest, she knew what they must be thinking and the looks they must be giving. She didn't want any more to do with the goings on down there. "That was close," she whispered when they were finally out of ear shot, "what do we do now?" she gave Claudia a concerned look and glanced around the room as if someone might be overhearing them even there.
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Post subject: Posted: January 18th, 2008, 12:22 pm |
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Cortez, thought Mary, the cursed gold.
She looked down at her leg, groaning. At least the bleed seemed to be slowing up a bit.
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but I will post here tonight or even tomorrow at the latest - I promise, or may teh evil monkies with pink stripes and purple polka dots take me captive in my sleep. 
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Also, notice Raelyn's post at the top, dear. 
